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Brainsnap

my mother throws

the wet headed mop at him,

expecting him, nimble and atheletic

to jump over it

but it hits his calf

and ankle with

a sickening crack

and he falls

like tree felled in a storm

as he hits the too long green grass

there is a wet thud, thud.

 

then a momentary silence

striking in it's completeness

so profound, it is almost zen like

 

broken by the high pitched wail

as the pain receptors in my brothers brain

kick in to high gear,he writhes on the ground

my mother hovering over him

repeating this mantra

"you were supposed to jump!

you, were supposed to jump"

 

he was foueteen, the local sport star

arrogant as only teenagers can be.

 

she would have been middle to late forties

a single parent having worked a double shift

 

I cannot remember his infraction,

there were;  oh, so many

but still 38 years on

I can feel the silence

so absolute....

and hear the mantra....

 

you were supposed to jump

                                    you were supposed to jump

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Written by
betterdays
F / Australian
Published
Jan 21, 2017
Lines·Words
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Notes

My mother to my recollection only ever twice lost the plot in anger....this was one of those times....as I say I have no recall of what my brother did...

My mother worked hard and was a good mother...and father to us...

I write this today...because  I found myself un a similar situation...

not that I was violent toward my child

but that I was so blindingly angry that  I could have been.

As to why that is another story entirely.  Suffice to say youthful exuberance, and no fear, can be a mix that makes Momma mad.....

My brother was bruised by the mop handle, every body carried the shock of that moment with them for a good many years....My mother apologised profusely to us all for her loss of control....and I think that was when we as children had that epiphany children have...that parents are humans too with strengths a d weaknesses.

As a child I was in awe of the monentous nature of that moment, as an adult I do not condone the violence within it, but after today...I may have a better understanding of it

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