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Mar 2012
the problem


women


have


is


when


they


are


young


they


­are


locked


into


this


breeding


paradigm


which


doesn'­t


give


them


any


freedom


of


thought

and


when


they­


get


older


the


hormones


go


and


they

are


wrecked !
















the problem


women


have


is


when


they


are


young


they


­are


locked


into


this


breeding


paradigm


even


though
­

they


may


not


breed


and


when


they


get


older


th­e


hormones


go


and


they

are


wrecked !
not misogynist : o ) , men have their issues too like being silly egoists all their life !

what i have written immediately above illustrates quite well the difference between poetic and non poetic writing, technically that should be β€œlives”, but β€œlife” compounds also the sense of a man having this issue too, that is, the sentence blurrs and combines both the sense of an individual man (perhaps me  ;o ) and men generically !
andrew levin
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andrew levin
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   Odi and Paul Hardwick
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