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Mar 2012
The Greatest Thing happened while the
                                                   First of your kind was sleeping

The empowerment of women movement got it wrong to me they slant truth against themselves
Power yes the measuring in social justice but not in truth as to true worth honor and dignity the

World would be a strange and different place first man left to himself would have no future yes
Paradise was his home but a mansion that you only roam through empty rooms lays flat in the

Heart and dulls life not enhances it so on this wise a great dream came true Adam awoke and
Found the dream had come to life and at that time of perfection they were perfectly equal as a

Team the man leads the woman’s role is to follow but in the most supreme idea of servitude you
Can’t escape the whole equation of life underlines serve others the Holy lamb came as a servant

We only find our true selves when we deny ourselves and give unto others but to do so is to
Swim against the current because when Adam and Eve departed from the garden self was

Enthroned as king no longer was it rule by cooperation now the beast mentality from the garden
To the jungle women became overshadowed and the theme of her natural equality was forever

Ended but only a mental pigmy can’t see the inherit brilliance that exists it was the fast track
To second class persons how neat create a mindset that is collectively bent to mans favor and

Women gets what’s left oh how precious just two things God made them as first with man not
As an afterthought and then this really messes up the male dominate show it seems they have

Brains sorry guys it’s not a cheap imitation it’s the same as the one you have and you know
When they apply it and work at it they can pass you up it is quickly questioned and is passed

Off as just a fluke there again if stupidity was the common rule it would work but little
Argument is needed for the obvious her glory reverberates throughout history achievements

Varied as the flowers and as magnificent in her truly the sun does rise and set or more correctly
Sons and daughters rise through her maternal gifts that endow us throughout the world in Arabia

They point fingers everywhere for their failures stop and look behind where you make your prize
And gift exist they have in their history great minds that made them a great people but when they

Dehumanize half of their population and make them live on the stringent edge of society they get
Even less than half of life’s fulfillment you can’t be that arrogant and be blessed ever enterprise
Known to man owes its success to women even God’s great works would be diminished or non

Existent if lone women hadn’t paid the price and through their love and devotion we have a
World as we know it God help us if we didn’t have them
Written by
Hal Loyd Denton  Pana Ill
(Pana Ill)   
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