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Commuter Poet
Poems
Nov 2016
Loss
What once was there
Has gone
I never knew loss
Until now
Your great presence
Has departed
Like the last train
Disappearing softly into the night
And we, who are left
On the platform of our lives
Feel your absence
Remember your presence
And realise, the good times we shared
Are over
We who experience the loss
One day will become βthe departingβ
And our pain
Will be felt
By others
7th November 2016
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Commuter Poet
UK
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