the bulb around your head. held up like a halo by tiny unfolding hands-- they offer what they can
the look in your bedroom eyes, your heart by your newborn child. "i will never stop"
it paints the speed of orbits it colors the stars in the night sky it knows the future really but will not let you know so as to not spoil the surprise
yet dominance and death are love yet war and famine, cruelty just things to think about leave an end open and you will see the new thing
put yourself first, i think God wants to hear you sing!
everything is falling so brilliant into your only eyes, shining as it does and only for you prized.
i like that ending consonant. it has good declarative color.