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May 2016
Too many commas!

Did you EVER once stop to consider
How breath
Pausing breath
Like breath
This breath
Gets breath
Monotonous?!
So annoying...>_< I have an editations thread and I SWEAR people go to town on commas. *facepalm*
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xmxrgxncy  21/F/the forest
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