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ashen smog

loneliness has defined this old soul. Bittersweet melody has tuned my way of living. I don't know how much my heart could stand the weight and wait for that simple moment, that single spark to feel alive and stop breathing the ashen smog of reality.
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pax
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Mar 20, 2016
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http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1410725/ashen-fields/

from ashen gray to ashen fields

comes, ashen smog...

do they care if I'm loved?

perhaps I'm too comfortable on my

own space and too confined to be bothered.

thank you for reading,

me...

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#love#feelings#life#alive#reality#live#spark#smog#confined#ashen
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