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Niel John Ortizo
Poems
Feb 2016
Who Gave Up on Their First Love?
Who gave up on their first love?
The first love they waited,
The first love they cherished,
The first love who vanished.
Without a doubt I was at fault,
The guy who put everything to a halt,
But just let it pass like a thunder bolt,
Who gave up on their first love?
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