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Feb 2016
Who gave up on their first love?
The first love they waited,
The first love they cherished,
The first love who vanished.  

Without a doubt I was at fault,
The guy who put everything to a halt,
But just let it pass like a thunder bolt,
Who gave up on their first love?
Niel John Ortizo
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Niel John Ortizo
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     Vanessa Gatley
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