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Queen O' queen, this is thy king ( remake of david bowie's space oddity) in remembrance of david bowie.

by brandon-nagley

i. Queen O' queen, this is thy king Queen O' queen, this is thy king; Put thine amulet, around thy neck- For me. ii. Queen O' queen, this is thy king(10,9,8,7,6) Upon saturns ring's, a beloved dream; (5,4,3) Taketh mine hand, glideth the moon's with me. ( 2,1,liftoff) iii. This is thine king mine dearest queen Thou hath taken me far away, To the places only known By saint's and those whom pray. This is thy king mine dearest Queen Erelong love, tis thine hope I cling; And I'm higher in the most Ravishing way. Erelong dove, We'll maketh love in a holy way. iv. For here, am I dancing on the cosmos, Beyond angelic tunes, Thine eye's of cocoa tides, Blend's inside me As I rise. v. Though we've passed the universal edge I'm peaceful in thine presence Alive or dead; I feeleth the dark matter- Bubble around in mine head, as Nirvana's In ourn sight's, Zion's breath. Queen O' queen, looketh ahead The stream's; their flowing as Milk and honey tree's Touch ourn feet, A tranquil homestead. vi. For here, am I dancing on the cosmos, Beyond angelic tunes, Thine eye's of cocoa tides, Blend's inside me As I rise....... ©Brandon Nagley ©Lonesome poets poetry ©Earl Jane Nagley(Filipino rose) dedicated
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Published
Jan 13, 2016
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After listening to David Bowie's song space oddity today. The song got stuck in mine head! So decided to dedicate a poem to mine queen based off of the tune space oddity by David Bowie. This is a dedicated poem to Bowie's remembrance as well not just a poem to Jane! Rip me Bowie, lovely old soul. everyone has been speaking of Bowie's older music which I Love and always have.. Though if noone has heard his last song I put out two days before his death called ( Lazarus) you should listen to it. Really his last words. So hauntingly beautiful though so depressing as you could see him being eaten away by his cancer fighting.. And video shows how deathly he was. Though his last song Lazarus was amazing!!!!

And btw erelong means- soon.. Or shortly

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