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David Ehrgott
Poems
Dec 2015
The New Commuter Blues
The comm-u-ter
It go choo-choo
Down the track
The comm-u-ter
It go choo-choo
Down the track
And if you knew
That comm-u-too
Then you'd yoo-hoo
Yeah, you'd yoo-hoo
Left the station
For vacation
Five O' Eight
Left the station
For vacation
Five O' Eight
On a friday
With no rain date
Ain't that great
Now ain't that great
Got the voo-doo
In the boom room
Friday night
Got the voo-doo
In the boom room
Friday night
If you'd seen her
Then you'd greet her
"What a sight"
Now, ain't that nice?
On the new train
The Northern Blue train
It's all right
On the new train
That Northern Blue train
It's all right
You can catch it
'cept on Sunday
You got that right?
Now, ain't that nice?
The comm-u-ter
It go choo-choo
Down the track
The comm-u-ter
It go choo-choo
Down the track
And if you knew
That comm-u-too
Then you'd yoo-hoo
Yeah, you'd yoo-hoo
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