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la vierge

"let's do it." says i one night

"no no i daren't." (pronounced "durn't") says she *"m'father would be

so angry.."*

the next tuesday i say:

"hey we should get together go wild and get into some shit--you might really like it!"

she says "noo.. well, maybe sometime. b-but you can't let on to my sister! oh would she be jealous of it all."

"mum's th'word" i says.

"and you can't get her to do it instead!" she cautions.

"s'alright. i like those mirrored freckles on your lip. she doesn't have those."

"okay well i daren't do it now tho."

 

a month later i say *"well do

you wanna, donna?"*

a sly smile then "how about a drink first?"

so i buy us hennessy and we drink

**** near the whole bottle

and she, real drunk now says only

"noo noo i daren't do it!!" (here bad timing chortles leerily at me with that

"oh ohh ha ha ha ... ooops!!" shit-eating grin)

while the bottle rolls round under the table.

so i pass the year away

with a few casual encounters

and

then she turns up some tuesday night on my porch with a moan sayin'

"oh i wanna!"

so of course i

did it, twice,

and she, while rubbing my belly after said:

*"ohh. that really is nice!"*

& so i did it once more for kicks ...

holdin' her down on that big king bed.

 

th'next week she comes in wearing

new leather boots/hair curled/breasts overspilling

she asks

"have you ever seen la dolce vita?"

while we're sweating away

"yes."

so she gushed *"oh but doesn't it show

how beautiful it really is?

the joining of two people so hot

& sacred?"*

"geez." says i, "so become a catholic already."

she giggled ("you comedian!") and wanted to keep doing it again

a few times

but you know, i was quite serious.

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Written by
alloyddavies
32 / M / Canadian
Published
Nov 25, 2011
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Notes

odd daydream hashed into a meter which just flew into my head a couple days back. wouldn't leave til i put proper words to it.

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