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WITH FEELING THIS TIME

by @Twice9

everyone who passes through the  house of James plays a part in their second story   story Nick is not of  the kitchen but he’s ghosting there and he tries he tries   with words   he tries with dance he tries so hard we barely see him! James is thirsty! and that’s the other story... He's drying cocaine on an old gas cooker when ‘Phelie   blows in on a colleague   o’ Koz Bar leaves   hi  poising   cat-ready   on a brown couch on a couch that remembers no shape though she tries she tries to make an impression on our blurred nerves too beginning with alrigh' which is  hi too   but with feeling   this hi assumes we know drama gril and da Richmond crew And I try to say I mean I am trying to say the couch remembers no shape I have no memory of drama teachers or  michelle yelling again darling with feeling this time then she tells me what *a lonely time it has been since the…addiction -* michelle poising there upon the word like a  Lepidopterist’s pin on au-then-tic-i-ty - isn’t it enough that I said it? now that it’s a dead thing it spreads its terrible wings and 'Phelie double drops her second story    hello  hello we lean into a kiss  hello her lips are not dry though she smokes her mouth un-wet she tries to say hello by laughing at I've given up not-smoking and we talk and kiss  a fresh hello undress hello touch hello leading to a breathless hello   hello   hello and now  I am saying, again darling with feeling this time
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Twice9
Escher/ Hersham Surrey
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Written by
Twice9
Escher/ Hersham Surrey
Published
Oct 5, 2015
Time
3m
Notes

Meeting 'Phelie' at a house party. One interesting girl. Not her name of course. I chose an abbreviation of Ophelia because I love the line in Hamlet 'unaware of her own distress' and this kind of summed her up.

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