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jeffrey robin
Poems
Sep 2015
... the daily scar
)(
He saw the pain written in her eyes
(,,,,, & her scars )
They told him it was a
Masterpiece of Beauty
••
They told him he should take a few steps
Back ..
& he would see
::::
So he did .
////
And then he could see the whole girl
In relationship to her scars
& then he could see
The one girl
In relationship to her world
And then he could see
The scars
The girl
Her world
In relationship
To the whole world
::
And then he could see that the world
Was scarred
But if he stepped back he could see
It was a masterpiece
And then he stepped back and saw
The power and beauty of eternity
And he felt glad
•
But he could no longer see the girl
Or her scars
For she was so small and insignificant
Somewhere in eternity
And her pain seemed so insignificant
And her scars seemed so insignificant
Because her life seemed so insignificant
Because she didnt step back into eternity
To find real beauty
But only stepped back a few feet
To admire her scars
Amid the admiration
Of other scarred people
within the safety
Of their insignificance
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jeffrey robin
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