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jeffrey robin
Poems
Jun 2015
..... what I used to think was ..... (?)
X
I used to think that love was the natural result
Of KNOWLEDGE
//
That by knowing somone you came to
UNDERSTAND that person
and that the common humanity between people
Would lead to compassion and to respect
\|\
as we are ****** beings
This natural KNOWLEDGE and UNDERSTANDING
Would also carry over into that aspect of life
( however more complicated it might be )
but that the potential conflicts would be
Lessened by the LOVE each person
Would naturally have for everyone else
/:/
BUT
THEN I STARTED READING THE POEMS
ON HELLO POETRY !
& now I know that
LOVE is when you
( basically )
"" commandeer " another persons life
And make it an appendage of your own
By presenting a list of NEEDS that the other person
( called --- ironically --- the beloved )
Must fulfill (on demand )
Or else be condemned and emotionally violated
In public and thru poetry !
///
The ---- beloved --- is required
To have no other purpose in life
Than to fulfill the NEEDS of the
Self - proclaimed --- ---- lover
And to offer COMPLETE PROTECTION
against ANY sense of insecurity
That might ensue in the mind of the lover
////
BOY !
WHAT A THING TO KNOW !!!
:///:
( though -- I must confess --
I STILL --really don't believe this is what LOVE is )
//
I hear this muted voice in my head
Yearning to be heard !
WHAT IS IT SAYING ?
( like it is a response from the
Be-loved
To the
Lover )
:::
I hear it now !!!!
/:/
It is saying
YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME !!!
AND IF YOU THINK I AM GOING
TO " COMMANDEER"
Your life
In a vain attempt to
SAVE YOU ,,,, !!!!!
you are mistaken
//
Because love IS natural
Because it IS compassionate
All I can really say is
••
GROW UP !
DIS-ARM YOURSELF !
YOU ARE AS LOVED AS MUCH AS YOU CAN BE LOVED
WHICH IS -- SIMPLY STATED --
YOU ARE LOVED AS MUCH AS YOU ACTUALLY LOVE
( WITHOUT THE FANFARE
OF YOUR POETIC ELABORATIONS )
Written by
jeffrey robin
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