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Apr 2015
To make, a

p r a i r i e,

it takes

a clover

and

one

bee, one

clover and,

a bee

and revery,

the revery -- alone

will do if bees,

are few…

Emily Dickinson
Original -
To make a prairie it takes a clover and one bee,      
One clover, and a bee.
And revery.
The revery alone will do,
If bees are few.




I was born on the prairies (go ahead.. you know you want to say it) Grande Prairie.  I have lived in Alberta, Saskatchewan and Manitoba and with bees,... dropping like flies I thought this was appropriate.
Prompt day five - Take an Emily Dickinson Poem and massage the punctuation. Apologies post and pre
Ottar
Written by
Ottar  where you will find me
(where you will find me)   
499
   Elizabeth Squires, bex and SPT
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