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Mar 2015
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she cut herself

And lay down on her bed and died

NOTHING OF VALUE IS EVER LOST

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Actually
That's not true

She didn't die

But I just wanted to make the poem more dramatic
So that       You      might like it more

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I had first started the poem by saying

SHE CUT HERSELF AND WONDERED WHY

But I thought that this might cause

YOU

to wonder why also

Which might produce in you some

Stress

or

Anxiety

and because I caused that in you

You wouldn't like me

So I changed it

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It's like the movie

AMERICAN ******

and then the guy kills the ******

and then the jury says

NO ! HE WAS LEGALLY SANE

and.....

( oops )

I'm starting to say what I really feel

Which might cause you to think for yourself

And get

STRESSED

or

ANXIOUS !

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So

I'll just say

WE ARE LIKE THAT GIRL LYING ON THE BED

MAYBE BLEEDING

MAYBE DYING

who knows ?

Who cares ?

NOTHING OF VALUE

NOTHING OF VALUE

NOTHING OF VALUE

it's just a life
Written by
jeffrey robin
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   Cam Godfrey
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