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Feb 2015
Fluid air like streams
of water
skims down throat
and neck
filling emptied lungs
of parched humanity
with life-breath
gently gasped
like dust
of an angel
drawn in as quiet
as childhood;
first breath;
a life less languished
Blood-bled
with silken respite
that enters in
moistens with redeeming ebb
of unconscious inhalation
a deeper depth of daylight
pouring into raucous chest
fluid air like streams
of water
replenishing what was once broken.
very much a stream of consciousness. I guess trying to describe the feelingΒ Β of having an inner haven. (unedited)
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Sydney  England
(England)   
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