Sometimes on the way out of Giant, I’ll spend time freeing change from the receipt paper bindle in my coat pocket for one two-twist mystery prize from a Folz machine.
Two quarters: just enough for a plastic, sapphire ring and a cheap laugh while I juggle coffee cream cartons in both arms.
I strap them in the passenger seat, sharing it as my sister and I had just to sit up straight and marvel at the maple branches washing the windshield in green, leaving helicopters and dew trails.
We watched slug trails glisten like Berger Lake water beneath the incandescent streetlight. Bright like the last cigarette my grandma snuffed out in a smokeless ash tray. Bright like the first halogen headlights that stung my retinas. Bright like the quarter my grandpa gave me for the Folz machine in the Sylvania. And bright like the plastic, emerald ring I showed him.
I borrowed the first and second stanzas from "Prom in '96," reworked them for clarity, and added more personal details at the end to add more depth to the poem. "Prom in '69," looking at it now, feels really stagnant and impersonal like I had no idea what I was talking about. I'm much happier with this, or at least happy enough to workshop it in my poetry class.