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jeffrey robin
Poems
Jan 2015
& in the beginning it began
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( rain )
song in the Afternoon
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she said
YOU SEEM SO HURT
SO BROKEN
SO ABANDONED
I LOVE OLD BROKEN THINGS
LET ME LOVE YOU
LET ME HELP YOU
I smiled
Her brittle precocious audacity was quite charming
Her longing to be real
(Her own buried pain )
And I said
WHY DONT YOU COME OVER TO MY HOUSE
SATURDAY MORNING
AND HELP ME WORK ON MY OLD CAR
ITS SURELY OLD AND BROKEN DOWN
AND NEEDS SOME LOVE
she looked a little surprised
Even hurt
But said
SURE
I ' LL BE THERE
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Well
She sure knew nothin about cars
But she was game
Under the hood
Under the car
Crawling around
She was really helpful
And quite humble about things
We had a great time
And finally got the thing running
••
We went inside
I found some old clothes my big sister
Had left behind
And I gave it to her and invited her to
Use the shower
While I put our clothes in the washer
••
She came out all ***** and span
And we just stood there awhile looking
At each other
she said
YOURE NOT REALLY BROKEN
AND ABANDONED
ARE YOU ?
and stood there in her honest vulnerability
NOT ANY MORE THAN MOST
I said
MAYBE NOT ANY MORE THAN YOU
I added
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We stood there in an awed silence
//
She said
WELL
I GOTTA GET ON HOME
THANKS FOR SPENDING
SOME TIME WITH ME
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SAY
MAYBE YOU CAN TAKE ME
FOR A RIDE IN YOUR CAR SOMEDAY
she stared down at the ground
OH
IM SURE OF THAT
I said
IM SURE OF THAT
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jeffrey robin
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