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six-eight time

by mvmlynn

humming tunes, singing blues, dancing jewels miss looking for love is dancing all over your leather shoes over uneven pavement, over failed engagements i sent your ring back, i couldn't bear to see it, nor sell it even now, my six-eight time signatures are still bringing your custom-length tailcoats to a Viennese waltzing all while your upper-echelon friends keep pretending like they don't find satisfaction in my subtle mourning tonight is all humming tunes, singing blues, and dancing jewels i am still lingering, still humming our tunes, still singing our blues, i am still feigning ignorance, and my finger is still missing a jewel, i am still center stage, but someone else dances with you
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mvmlynn
22 / Cisgender Female / my happy place
For You?
Written by
mvmlynn
22 / Cisgender Female / my happy place
Published
Jun 14, 2023
Lines·Words
14·115
Notes

for reference Viennese waltz is sometimes written in 6/8 time signatures and regular waltz is often 3/4 time

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#dance#jealousy#sadness#engagement#fiancee#singer#rich#waltz#blues
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