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338 · Sep 2017
Honeymoon in Hull
David Bremner Sep 2017
We came
to Hull

As the Humber flowed
muddy with our romance

By the Docks without trawlers
We laughed
and we loved

Praying forever.
David Bremner Nov 2016
I stood there quietly - without a sound
With thoughts of things I deem profound
Like Socialism's methods fair
And Lily Allen's long dark hair
332 · Oct 2016
London Orbital
David Bremner Oct 2016
She doesn't care, Felicity
Which side of the M25 she was born
But I do as the rain
Hammers down the asphalt

The poetry of the concrete collar
Exit ramps, overheads,benzene
Subtly turns me on
As she removes her high heels

'London Orbital' she slowly mouths
while lighting another cigarette
It has three 'O's
Not unlike myself

I watch her from behind the wheel
The motorway's pulse fills the space
Between us and the world
As we wait for the night.
330 · Feb 2019
Arcturus Risen
David Bremner Feb 2019
Travelled light of time.
Arcturus risen
over the gentle, waveless ocean.
Its light moving with steady purpose
since the time of her birth.
To shine
on her fresh-kissed lips.
324 · Nov 2016
For a Thurso Hippie
David Bremner Nov 2016
I see her barefoot on the sand
she gazes out to sea
The breeze touches her hair
Her eyes fix on the surf

She is at peace
With the sea

Above the waves there is motion
coloured forms are alive
Butterflies, dancing with the life
of a future unlived.

She is at peace
With the butterflies

The butterflies reflect her moods
Sky blue with hope
Scarlet red with love
Rich green with Earth

She is at peace
With the Earth

Before me she transforms
into a meadow of wildflowers
That sing of 60's peace
on a quiet Friday afternoon

She is at peace
With the afternoon

My mind briefly imagines her
Below Caziel's mural
Absorbing a culture of hope
That lives within her heart

She is at peace
With her heart

And then I see her turn
the sunlight plays briefly on her face
She retraces her steps into town
leaving footprints in the sand

She is at peace
With herself.
322 · Aug 2015
Lost Love
David Bremner Aug 2015
As the rain
Hammers
The sand
Of the shore

I see her walk
Felicity
Legs brown
With summer

Her long dark hair
Hangs heavy
As she casts a rock
Into Neptune's jaws

Into the surf
I dive
To retrieve
This rock

To hold it
As a last
Memory
Of her.
322 · Sep 2017
River Pebble
David Bremner Sep 2017
My river pebble
Through a clear pool
Reflection muddied
I saw you, picked you up

Admiring with my eyes
Your smooth surfaces
Pressing with my fingers
Your hard heart.
313 · Jul 2015
For a Girl on a Wall
David Bremner Jul 2015
About 30
she sits
On a wall
smoking

A good wall
Strong
A good ***
Soft

Behind her
the General Hospital
Shadows
the image

The scene
******
Through lack of
care

My mind has
painted her
Like a
Vettriano

Colour
Desire
Searing
Lust

The bus
arrives
She rides
away

My daydream
breaks
The image
endures

Quickly
my thoughts
Scribble
a poem

Inadequate
tribute
To a girl
On a wall
309 · Jan 2017
Snowflakes and You
David Bremner Jan 2017
Snowflakes hang in the air
As though suspended
From invisible cords
And they move my hand

To try and write these words
To describe my love
For you and them, who are
So dear and special

They seem to flit around
In a thousand ways
Caught by the tricks of air
To fill me with joy

Like you, my precious girl
So unique and kind
Lovely as a snowflake
Yet perhaps more rare.
307 · Oct 2017
At Russell Square Gardens
David Bremner Oct 2017
The leaf. Held on,
despite its withered,
colour-changed state.

Remembering. As autumn
stored away summer's memories
like the squirrels in the gardens.

Grenfell. Westminster Bridge,
Finsbury Park and Borough Market
had tried to steal its greenness.

Then it fell. It fluttered,
on a barely perceivable breeze,
down between some tourists.

I saw it. Settle there,
on the Square's grass, unnoticed,
ready for decay

and the renewal of life.
305 · Sep 2017
Crabbing at Whitby
David Bremner Sep 2017
In Whitby I noticed the teenage girls
who lined the long, Bank Holiday quayside.
Amongst the noise, their young faces serene,
they stood with siblings, step dads, always mam.
The sun shone from their hair - some dark, some blonde,
they wore makeup they did not need.
For the eye is always drawn towards youth.
I noticed too a kind of uniform,
skinny jeans, leggings, flesh revealing tops.
Though it was the lines they held that caught me.

The orange lines that ran from their young hands.
Bright, twisted twine that vanished in the depths
of the inky harbour waters that lay
before them like a still, unlived future.
Crabbing at Whitby, their faces were set
in concentration and female patience.
The patience their grandmothers had needed
when the glass fell and the wind rose at night.
Today though they tended their baited lines,
silent, awaiting the unseen quarry.

Quarry they'd keep in water-filled buckets
of brightly coloured, cheap, cheerful plastic.
To me the whole thing seemed somewhat pointless
competing to see who could catch the most,
catch the biggest of these vicious creatures.
Who'd attack them at every given chance
drawing the blood from their innocent hearts.
Until the metaphor revealed itself.
The girls' lives were now turning like the tide,
the boys like ***** were circling the bait.
303 · Dec 2016
Flickering Flames
David Bremner Dec 2016
Tonight, my loved one, the silence
Is like a seductive whisper
That lies here between our bodies
As we embrace by the fire

And let the warmth that it gives us
Be held in our hearts for all time
The way its light plays on our skin
And the love it shows in our eyes

The spark that started that fire
Ignited, my sweet, between us
It grew as twin flames in our thoughts
Which blazed as they came together

So now to gaze in that fire
And hold you and kiss your sweet hair
And watch the flames rise around us
Like flickering dancers of love.
David Bremner Aug 2019
Sir Richard's tomb in silence sleeps
The day has broken fair
Then tourists come ashore and shout
'I wonder what's in there?'
'Some dust or bones, a skull, a sword?'
I doubt they even care
But others visit Richie's tomb
And stare a silent prayer.
301 · Jun 2015
Thurso
David Bremner Jun 2015
Thurso sparkles
in late afteroon sun
With colours gifted
through light refracted
by an abstract prism

By Caziel's mural,
a teenage girl smokes
and dispels a towns cares.
299 · Feb 2015
Dreamt Night
David Bremner Feb 2015
Shadow cast up
Upon the wall
A gift from the moonlight
Made precious through your loving

Dead of the night
The silent time
A gift from the darkness
Made special through your presence

Dawn breaking through
New day begun
A gift from the daylight
Made together in our dream.
297 · Jun 2015
Colours
David Bremner Jun 2015
Darkness cradles the soul
In a night of black
Minds fly in fancy
Teenage loves renewed

I see you naked
Bathed in yellow light
Multi-coloured hand maid
In an orange sea

Purple, blue, crimson, green
******* the life
From a future - not ours
Yet theirs - the colours

I sense you near
Reach for your hand
We edge toward the precipice
Together we fly.
297 · Jan 2017
Longing
David Bremner Jan 2017
Searching here once more
For what may or may not be
Love seems lost tonight.
296 · Jan 2017
Free?
David Bremner Jan 2017
Yes, I can think
Therefore, I am
I can know my being
And you can choose to love me

I am thirty
That was the age
Or thereabouts at least
When Roquentin understood

I'm glad he did
He did me good
Through all his suffering
He made it all much clearer

To understand
My existence
The purpose of my life
My responsibility

For I am free
To love or not
And I love you my friend
As I try to give essence

To this my life
Here upon earth
And try to comprehend
The concept of being free
294 · Jan 2017
Touches
David Bremner Jan 2017
How your soft hair
Plays in my hand
As love, we sit tonight
Here by a roaring fire

The room is quiet
And so are we
For words have no place here
Where feelings reign supremely

I touch your cheek
It feels so soft
As soft as all the love
That grows in my heart for you

I take your arm
And draw you close
To gently kiss your ear
And whisper there my longing

For you alone
My chosen one
The one whose hair I touch
And the one whose soul I love.
293 · Mar 2015
Spring Flowers
David Bremner Mar 2015
Tiny spring flowers
Pushing up through the brown earth
Breaking winters grasp

Rich and precious jewels
Lending colour to the land
In splurges of joy

And scent for the air
Carried by the spring time breeze
Like perfume for hope

Such is the power
Of small and tiny flowers
And soon they'll be here.
289 · Dec 2018
The Cove
David Bremner Dec 2018
Sit for a while
On an ancient piece of sculpted driftwood
Watch the tide turn
By the Point o' Scarden
Under a sky that's as grey
as a gulls' dipped wing.

The sea plays upon millenia of boulders
Listen to its whisper
Here time forgives a life's mistakes.
289 · Jan 2017
Some Thoughts of You
David Bremner Jan 2017
You are the sunrise
Of a thousand days
And you move my soul
In a thousand ways

I press your picture
Up against my heart
Without your loving
My day cannot start

If you are not here
How I long for you
You fill up my life
Please hear, this is true

As I end this poem
Some say words are cheap
But these ones I mean
My feelings are deep.
287 · Nov 2016
Carousel
David Bremner Nov 2016
Dizzy colours flash
Alive with childrens laughter
Heartbeat of the fair.
285 · Dec 2016
Caught in the Ebb Tide
David Bremner Dec 2016
And so my love
You've slipped away
As if caught by the tide
That now has begun to ebb

And leaves me here
Alone once more
Left upon the shoreline
With only the rocks around

The rocks on which
My hopes are dashed
Like shipwrecks in a storm
In which all dreams are perished

But think of you
I often will
And when I do I'll smile
For you remain so special

Perhaps the tide
Again shall flow
And love can reach this place
So the rocks will turn to sand

And then the sun
Will shine once more
Beat down upon this beach
And warm my heart with loving.
284 · Nov 2016
School Days
David Bremner Nov 2016
I recall, Julie, that day
When, as equals, we met
At the altar that forever stands
Behind the co-op

And how the bell that rang
A summons for registration
Symbol of bureaucracy
Truncated passion

.....but fuelled desire!
284 · Dec 2016
At Dounreay
David Bremner Dec 2016
This girl
of dark hair and sturdy calves
Has the spherical *** appeal
of the Fast Reactor

So, one day
When it's all gone
and I'm too old
I might just tell her

Until then it exists
within this poem
That you've just read
my own confessor.
David Bremner Jun 2018
The rain lashed tar of Monday morning rush
A Midlands sky of cloudy faces set
In silent fury at this urban crush
Of octane dreams propelled and fuelled with debt
Dacia Duster, works traffic only
Concrete, concrete, concrete, exit ahead
Lane closes in four hundred yards. Lonely
A cone lies knocked over, crucified, dead
Oldbury Viaduct, M5, repairs
Queuing likely, expect delays. Fiat
JC07 GOD... we sat
Unmoving like that for hours, hours
Staring at the railings hung with flowers.

'Inspired' during an Easter time visit.
283 · Jun 2016
At Le Select
David Bremner Jun 2016
Pretty girls go by
With feral eyes
Yet none compare
To Felicity

Who sits with me
At Le Select
On the Boulevard Montparnasse
As evening falls

Felicity with whom
I made love
Last night
On the Rue Troyon

As darkness falls
We'll make love
With Paris
From atop the tower

Where a feminine city
Shines like jewels
On a sea of love
True love - ours.
David Bremner Feb 2017
Let our love flow
Like two burns
Who find their confluence
Within the heart

Then run
Like a mighty river
Tumbling over the rocks
Marrying in the still pools

Finding the sea.
280 · Aug 2016
The Memory of a Wave
David Bremner Aug 2016
In the spring-time it flitted
across the bay
In form it was delicate
shimmering in the strengthening sun

Through the long days of summer
it lay restful and content
A perfect partner to the sand
in vast, oceanic majesty

Autumn brought its trials
darkness descending as the wind rose
Yet it met the challenge
returning to the fray

Then the storms of winter
overcame it with life
It drowned among its own
though its memory remains.
David Bremner Aug 2017
I think I saw
what she saw.
The tide turning by the rocks,
the sea calm in its meeting with the shingle

I think I heard
what she heard.
The millenia witnessed by the rocks,
the children's footsteps crunching down the shingle

I think I knew
what she did not know
That her hair shone, her face was beautiful
as the swallows gathered for depart

and the rocks reflected her serenity.
276 · Dec 2018
Commuters
David Bremner Dec 2018
Suburban streets soaked with rain
Self-same journey once again
Along the backs of terraced homes
Council schemes, steeples, domes

This London rush. What's it for?
Another day just like before
Nothing like you likely planned
Then there is the tiny hand

That reaches up to hold on you
Too young to question what we do
If it's madness. If it's sane
Life gone on commuter trains

For her it's simple, not a muddle
She does not step around the puddle
That can and does reflect her face
That in its turn reflects your grace

Suburban streets soaked with rain
Self-same journey once again.
David Bremner Nov 2017
Green to gold lie leaves wind strewn
Trod beneath the city's feet
After falling on the benches
Where the office workers meet

The tree itself in spring held bloom
Its boughs so rich with flower
Bursting brightly upon the Square
A peaceful form of power

Unlike the dark metallic bomb
Science built to split the air
Atomic sickness, pain and death
Trees of hope burned with despair

So stand your ground in all seasons
Stand for those who stand for care
And if someone in you sees peace
Then let them stop, stand and stare.
275 · Dec 2016
Our Morning Song
David Bremner Dec 2016
In the soft light
Of a new day
We lie at last as one
In the company of love

For each other
And for this time
The special hour of dawn
Between wakefulness and sleep

The light streams in
Through the window
It sets for me the scene
Of a new day for loving

Each other darling
A day for us
To know each other more
And explore each others hearts

The shadows play
Upon the wall
Cast by those trees outside
And I smile at their dancing

That's so like both
Our dancing hearts
Which to some unheard song
Keep silent, single rythym

I see your hair
A river now
Flow upon the pillow
And I love with it to play

For how it feels
So soft to me
Like finest Eastern silk
A flowing, silky river

I kiss your eyes
You're still asleep
And your sweet lips murmur
How I'd love to wake you up

And quickly say
I love you dear
But now I let you sleep
And prolong this special time

I stroke your neck
So pale and fair
Again I see you stir
So I wrap my arms around

You my lover
My only one
I draw your body near
And mould it unto my own

So all morning
We'll lie like this
What better can we do
For we've fallen both in love

With each other
With this time
This breaking hour of day
And to this, our morning song.
272 · Oct 2018
Book Loan
David Bremner Oct 2018
She entered the canteen
With her coffee cup balanced
On a book.

It wasn't so much of a cup
I suppose
One of those shiny metal Thermos things
That don't break if you drop them
I'm rambling, prevaricating.

The book I loaned her
Two days after we met
And beyond eyes and ***
**** and cute turned-up nose
My eyes watched the book

Which she read
Day after day
Across the room.

I'd read it a dozen times
Knew it all by heart
No hurry I'll get it back when your done
I'm off for two weeks on Monday you might have to wait

What is this? Love? Infatuation?
Emotional adultery?
My story inscribing upon her heart?

Or just the slow progression
Of pages turned in the canteen
By her fingertips

Like days
Which I have to endure
To know the ending.




If you can give an answer please comment!!
270 · Mar 2015
For Lily
David Bremner Mar 2015
Let me hear your voice
I dream of you and I
Let me see your smile
You fill my every hour

A scene my mind has painted
Laid out upon my page
Long I have desired
Everything you embody
Never ending dream, never ending girl.
David Bremner Apr 2018
Monday morning murk,
rush-hour standstill.
Faces.
Solemn miles of traffic.
Dacia Duster, Qashqai Two.
Works Traffic Merging Ahead.
Cones.
Toppled idols
of the new religion.
266 · Dec 2016
Picnic
David Bremner Dec 2016
From my sandwich
You steal a bite
Is it really a month?
Since our coffee shop first-date

A month with you
And here we are
Safe in the time of spring
The time thats made for growing

Here on the bench
In this 'our' park
Where many times we've sat
Learning about each other

We find a way
To make the time
To simply be alone
In company of others

I close the flask
Our picnic done
And clear the things away
It's then that I catch the scent

Of blossoms? No
It's your perfume
So beautiful on you
How could I not have noticed

I catch your smile
My heart just stops
Well, figuratively
For it's beating double time

I tuck your hair
Behind your ear
And kiss you on the cheek
Like they do in old movies

It's time to go
Return to work
Factory and office
So quickly we make our plans

At 6 p.m
I'll pick you up
We'll go a drive somewhere
And try to catch the sunset

And then at night
We'll have to part
And wait for day to call
And our game to start once more.
262 · Nov 2016
The Junior Town Planner
David Bremner Nov 2016
The wood panneling and my ears
Reverberate with dullness
Dull men with dull words
Dull ladies as well

I, their understudy, listen
Too familiar phrases
Traffic management, zoning
Policy sixty-nine

While I watch her - the junior
With smouldering hard eyes
And sensuous red lips
Which she runs a biro across.


Written after Highland Council Planning Committee, 29th November 2016.
260 · Oct 2016
Typical Day
David Bremner Oct 2016
Quarter to four
Last minutes of the shift
Feet on the desk
Trying to read Larkin

'Days'
Quite relevant really
But the words dance
Upon the page

Across the desk
A teenage girl
Bangs on about her ****
Larkin is lost.
257 · Jul 2016
Night of Rain
David Bremner Jul 2016
A night of rain
with everyone talking about it
And I mean everyone
for it's hammering down

As they fill the hall
for the evening performance
Planned for outside
I take the stage

I and the others
Sweating below lights
And as my eye wanders
I see a forgotten face

There in the rows smiling back
I too quickly smile
Let it be known that I've seen
Then begin to wonder

What fills the mind?
Behind that smile
If I only knew
I'd forget the rain.
David Bremner Jun 2018
Across heather, peat, grey North Sea - the sun
Witnessed through eyes that give sleep to the hand
Attempts war with the clouds yet still not done
Driving the showers beyond the headland
Many miles distant from this hilltop view
Where the megaliths and cairns of grey stone
Lie moss-covered - now visited by few
Other than those whose blood, life, soul and bone
Were interred here in millennia past
So that I before a cathedral sky
A solar fireball can see at last
God-like rise up, burst out and shine through. Why?
  Draw near to me now and this burning sphere
  My hands on your *******, you can feel it here.
255 · Mar 2015
Summer Study (Haiku)
David Bremner Mar 2015
Summer zephyrs cool
Ice-creams held in children’s hands
Melting shapes and forms
253 · Dec 2016
The Light of the Flames
David Bremner Dec 2016
Oh come, take your place with me now
Here by the warmth of the fire
Fall into the clutch of my arms
Feel my heart race with desire

For you and your tumbling hair
Your body, your eyes and your smile
Oh come, now remain in my grasp
Our passion has grown for a while

Lets see the light of that fire
Reflect on those locks of your hair
Let it also shine in your eyes
For they are beyond all compare

And let the flame glow on your lips
It serves to enhance their softness
And fall, when I call, deep in love
A love that is blessed with sweet kindness.
249 · Mar 2019
Tree Hugging at Waterloo
David Bremner Mar 2019
Felicity blinks in the bright sunlight
Stepping off the train at Waterloo. Night,
Our time, seems gifted with hours too few.

Still, her mind is set on loving. She would
Even throw her arms around a tree. Should
She see 'neath it's bark rings of what could be.
249 · Nov 2016
Pivotal Moment
David Bremner Nov 2016
In an instant
The world seemed changed
As the wind fell
And snowflakes filled the sky

But it was not snow
That changed my world
It was YOU
Your smile, your touch, your love.
David Bremner Sep 2017
Waves roll across the bay
losing themselves on a beach

Clouds fly through the sky
vanishing into the horizon

Summer's petals fall
to the ground that receives them


Yet our love, that lives
in sea, air and soil

Is constant.
246 · Sep 2017
The Beach, Lybster Harbour
David Bremner Sep 2017
Song of the shingle
Sung to the tune of the sea
Her heart hears the words
David Bremner Dec 2016
Felicity sits
on hard concrete
Like a modernists dream
as she plays with a daisy

From Arthur House
I see her pose
As if for a ******
to form an image to keep

Preserving youth
Our own sweet youth
that shines out through her eyes
Mirrored in her English skin

She speaks some words
that may be French
Through the clouds streaks sunlight
She places down the daisy

And then she stands
Straightens her skirt
Lights up a cigarette
and smiles goodbye to this place.
245 · Dec 2016
Oil Drum - A 'Minute' Poem.
David Bremner Dec 2016
It sat there and began to leach
out on the beach.
It's spent 'black gold'
brought death so cold
to what poor bird it's plumage found
would well as drowned
as die so slow
what way to go
for something made by God's kind hand.
Now on the sand
an empty shell
and taste of hell.
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