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286 · Oct 2017
First Week in October
David Bremner Oct 2017
Dat by day the grey clouds hung
Round bails in wetness rolled
Hedgerows stood wind-harvested
The fields of colour bleached

Even the sea seemed heavy
Thick with slate
I doubted that life it held
As it fought against the dark cliffs

In town: Oily puddles formed
Empty cans clattered through Poundstretcher carpark
Cold wind Wick River whipped up
The swallows had left

I darkened....... Until

Robin flashed his red in conifer green
Felicity's rain-soaked hair clung to her face as she laughed
And the geese shared Heaven with the Milky Way
So that I,
                Could raise my spirit to the approaching storm.
283 · Dec 2016
Flickering Flames
David Bremner Dec 2016
Tonight, my loved one, the silence
Is like a seductive whisper
That lies here between our bodies
As we embrace by the fire

And let the warmth that it gives us
Be held in our hearts for all time
The way its light plays on our skin
And the love it shows in our eyes

The spark that started that fire
Ignited, my sweet, between us
It grew as twin flames in our thoughts
Which blazed as they came together

So now to gaze in that fire
And hold you and kiss your sweet hair
And watch the flames rise around us
Like flickering dancers of love.
281 · Jul 2015
For a Girl on a Wall
David Bremner Jul 2015
About 30
she sits
On a wall
smoking

A good wall
Strong
A good ***
Soft

Behind her
the General Hospital
Shadows
the image

The scene
******
Through lack of
care

My mind has
painted her
Like a
Vettriano

Colour
Desire
Searing
Lust

The bus
arrives
She rides
away

My daydream
breaks
The image
endures

Quickly
my thoughts
Scribble
a poem

Inadequate
tribute
To a girl
On a wall
281 · Nov 2016
Saint-Malo, A Tribute.
David Bremner Nov 2016
Solid city walls
Rising above golden sands
Magic everywhere

Old men playing boules
Silver ***** shining brightly
Pleasure everywhere

Sails and masts abound
A thriving busy quayside
People everywhere

Gardens rich with scent
Flowers alive with beauty
Colour everywhere

Spinning carousels
Ringing with happy laughter
Children everywhere

Azure sky and sea
In blazing summer sunshine
Lovers everywhere

Pretty mademoiselles
Joining their lips in loving
Passion everywhere

These are my sweet thoughts
When I think once more of you
Pretty Saint-Malo.
272 · Jan 2017
Romance is Our Fire
David Bremner Jan 2017
Alone we are
Just you and I
As I point at the flame
That dances in the fire

You hold your head
In both your hands
And seem to lose yourself
In the warmth of that rich glow

Your face is held
Within my gaze
You're everything to me
I wonder if I tempt you

To fall in love
Here this evening
Alone just you and I
Where romance is our fire.
David Bremner Oct 2018
I
Ernie struck up his pipes
Ten seconds TOO SOON
And in the wrong millennium

Fiona still had her SKIRT up
Adjusting the top of a nylon stocking
Whilst the KING OF THE JEWS
Left an unfinished drink on the bar
Of the Portland Arms Hotel.

All Hail Jesu, King of the Jews
Striding out through the Portland's door
All Hail George Munro
Best dry-stone dyker in the parish
And owner of a MOPED.

II

The procession moved SOUTH
Across the former A9
Careful never to exceed 30MPH
Fiona didn't go
(Preferring a young stranger's hand stroking her thigh)

Then -                                                                                    
The minister appeared, but.......
DIDN'T BELIEVE
That this was the Second Coming
He stood on the front steps of the kirk
That was now a Cathedral ( Lybster henceforth a SHINING CITY!)
Wishing all a HAPPY NEW YEAR
Including the KING OF THE JEWS
Whom he treated like all others
In true Presbyterian fashion
All Hail Jesu, King of the Jews
All Hail The LYBSTER STONE
Left outside in a forgotten corner
In true Presbyterian fashion

Beyond the Police Station and Primary School
A GREAT BEACON blazed
Lit by two schoolgirls and Mr Marshall Bowman
Pyre for a thousand years
Sinners preheated their teenage **** and middle aged bums at it
The nearby football pitch was illuminated by it
Nobody remembered the forgotten old folk because of it
They held their drinks and met their eyes
And as the procession arrived
Departed for the COMMUNITY CENTRE
A veritable Sodon and Gomorrah (BYOB!)

All Hail Jesu, King of the Jews
All Hail Mr Marshall Bowman
Rm32, Geography Block, WICK - HIGH - SCHOOL

(This part rhymes to appease the DEMANDERS)                        

The hall wis fill wi' yowng and owld
An' packed lek at hid wisna' cowld
Some were timid, ithers bowld
Little bairnies wid no be towld

When the lot hed gethered in
(The fire ootside hed raxed their sin)
They rolled their sleeves an got stuck in
Til grub an ***** an.. well.. ******!

All Hail Jesu, King of the Jews
All Hail Andrew Gunn
Fumbling with a fifteen year olds brassiere
In Donald Eyers' back garden

Jesus turned away from the COMMUNITY CENTRE sinners
leaving them with these words:
The Scribes and Pharisees of LYBSTER COMMUNITY COUNCIL
Will raise here a PAGAN STONE to mark this night
So that Alan Henderson can henceforth
URINATE on it on Gala night
in a political DEED.

And the Scribes took down these words for the minutes
As carefully as I imagined
Taking down the posties knickers.

Whenceforth -                                                                                    
Heralded by three giggling lassies
Jesus entered the great square of the SHINING CITY
Grey's Place
Thst held one butcher shop, two convenience stores
The Commercial Bar and a Post Office
That sold postcards of the harbour
and the Silver Cloud II.

All Hail Jesu, King of the Jews
All Hail the Silver Cloud II
That landed a record haul of 365 boxes
In 1973!

Bare was the square
That lay before the King of the Jews
Only Tony Ryrie's cat Patchy
Moved in its GREAT WASTES
Patch and an empty packet of Salt n Shake
The only witnesses
To the GREAT MILLENNIUM MIRACLE

Whereby -                                                                                  
A shaft of blinding light
Shone forth from the British Telecom phone box
Deflected off the Cathedral weathervane
Up, up (like a great *******) in to the heavens
Where the inhabitants of the moon Titan
Looking up through their dense, noxious atmosphere
Saw this light and sent
INTERPLANETARY FRATERNAL GREETINGS
To their sisters and brothers of Lybster (twinned with Fort Mackinac USA)
That were not returned

All Hail Jesu, King of the Jews
All Hail Johnny Mackay
Envoy from the plannet Titan
to the Court of St James

Jesus was NOT angered by this
For he knew that DEEP inside the people were good
And as Fiona (still in the Portland Arms) dabbed the TIA MARIA off
Her blood red lips
He struck south
Down past Donnie Mackenzie's

All Hail Jesu, King of the Jews
All Hail Donnie Mackenzie
Jannie of Lybster Primary
Pulling out your wobbly teeth in his cupboard
Then giving you a POLO

Until -                                                                                        
He reached the Harbour Road bus shelter
Where a choice was offered
To proceed to the harbour and part the Moray Firth
Or live amongst the lepers
Of SHELLIGOE ROAD.............

III

I was sent to the harbour
To pump the boat
The early morning frost glinted on a half-full Tia Maria bottle
That lay discared on the grass
I pulled the cork                                                
Took a long, sickly draw
                       Then threw it back  

In the SHINING CITY only some things had changed.
266 · Aug 2016
The Memory of a Wave
David Bremner Aug 2016
In the spring-time it flitted
across the bay
In form it was delicate
shimmering in the strengthening sun

Through the long days of summer
it lay restful and content
A perfect partner to the sand
in vast, oceanic majesty

Autumn brought its trials
darkness descending as the wind rose
Yet it met the challenge
returning to the fray

Then the storms of winter
overcame it with life
It drowned among its own
though its memory remains.
262 · Jun 2015
Colours
David Bremner Jun 2015
Darkness cradles the soul
In a night of black
Minds fly in fancy
Teenage loves renewed

I see you naked
Bathed in yellow light
Multi-coloured hand maid
In an orange sea

Purple, blue, crimson, green
******* the life
From a future - not ours
Yet theirs - the colours

I sense you near
Reach for your hand
We edge toward the precipice
Together we fly.
262 · Nov 2016
School Days
David Bremner Nov 2016
I recall, Julie, that day
When, as equals, we met
At the altar that forever stands
Behind the co-op

And how the bell that rang
A summons for registration
Symbol of bureaucracy
Truncated passion

.....but fuelled desire!
260 · Mar 2015
Spring Flowers
David Bremner Mar 2015
Tiny spring flowers
Pushing up through the brown earth
Breaking winters grasp

Rich and precious jewels
Lending colour to the land
In splurges of joy

And scent for the air
Carried by the spring time breeze
Like perfume for hope

Such is the power
Of small and tiny flowers
And soon they'll be here.
259 · Feb 2019
Arcturus Risen
David Bremner Feb 2019
Travelled light of time.
Arcturus risen
over the gentle, waveless ocean.
Its light moving with steady purpose
since the time of her birth.
To shine
on her fresh-kissed lips.
258 · Dec 2016
Our Morning Song
David Bremner Dec 2016
In the soft light
Of a new day
We lie at last as one
In the company of love

For each other
And for this time
The special hour of dawn
Between wakefulness and sleep

The light streams in
Through the window
It sets for me the scene
Of a new day for loving

Each other darling
A day for us
To know each other more
And explore each others hearts

The shadows play
Upon the wall
Cast by those trees outside
And I smile at their dancing

That's so like both
Our dancing hearts
Which to some unheard song
Keep silent, single rythym

I see your hair
A river now
Flow upon the pillow
And I love with it to play

For how it feels
So soft to me
Like finest Eastern silk
A flowing, silky river

I kiss your eyes
You're still asleep
And your sweet lips murmur
How I'd love to wake you up

And quickly say
I love you dear
But now I let you sleep
And prolong this special time

I stroke your neck
So pale and fair
Again I see you stir
So I wrap my arms around

You my lover
My only one
I draw your body near
And mould it unto my own

So all morning
We'll lie like this
What better can we do
For we've fallen both in love

With each other
With this time
This breaking hour of day
And to this, our morning song.
256 · Jun 2015
Thurso
David Bremner Jun 2015
Thurso sparkles
in late afteroon sun
With colours gifted
through light refracted
by an abstract prism

By Caziel's mural,
a teenage girl smokes
and dispels a towns cares.
256 · Jan 2017
Longing
David Bremner Jan 2017
Searching here once more
For what may or may not be
Love seems lost tonight.
254 · Feb 2015
Dreamt Night
David Bremner Feb 2015
Shadow cast up
Upon the wall
A gift from the moonlight
Made precious through your loving

Dead of the night
The silent time
A gift from the darkness
Made special through your presence

Dawn breaking through
New day begun
A gift from the daylight
Made together in our dream.
254 · Nov 2016
Carousel
David Bremner Nov 2016
Dizzy colours flash
Alive with childrens laughter
Heartbeat of the fair.
251 · Dec 2016
Picnic
David Bremner Dec 2016
From my sandwich
You steal a bite
Is it really a month?
Since our coffee shop first-date

A month with you
And here we are
Safe in the time of spring
The time thats made for growing

Here on the bench
In this 'our' park
Where many times we've sat
Learning about each other

We find a way
To make the time
To simply be alone
In company of others

I close the flask
Our picnic done
And clear the things away
It's then that I catch the scent

Of blossoms? No
It's your perfume
So beautiful on you
How could I not have noticed

I catch your smile
My heart just stops
Well, figuratively
For it's beating double time

I tuck your hair
Behind your ear
And kiss you on the cheek
Like they do in old movies

It's time to go
Return to work
Factory and office
So quickly we make our plans

At 6 p.m
I'll pick you up
We'll go a drive somewhere
And try to catch the sunset

And then at night
We'll have to part
And wait for day to call
And our game to start once more.
250 · Dec 2016
Caught in the Ebb Tide
David Bremner Dec 2016
And so my love
You've slipped away
As if caught by the tide
That now has begun to ebb

And leaves me here
Alone once more
Left upon the shoreline
With only the rocks around

The rocks on which
My hopes are dashed
Like shipwrecks in a storm
In which all dreams are perished

But think of you
I often will
And when I do I'll smile
For you remain so special

Perhaps the tide
Again shall flow
And love can reach this place
So the rocks will turn to sand

And then the sun
Will shine once more
Beat down upon this beach
And warm my heart with loving.
248 · Dec 2016
At Dounreay
David Bremner Dec 2016
This girl
of dark hair and sturdy calves
Has the spherical *** appeal
of the Fast Reactor

So, one day
When it's all gone
and I'm too old
I might just tell her

Until then it exists
within this poem
That you've just read
my own confessor.
247 · Jan 2017
Touches
David Bremner Jan 2017
How your soft hair
Plays in my hand
As love, we sit tonight
Here by a roaring fire

The room is quiet
And so are we
For words have no place here
Where feelings reign supremely

I touch your cheek
It feels so soft
As soft as all the love
That grows in my heart for you

I take your arm
And draw you close
To gently kiss your ear
And whisper there my longing

For you alone
My chosen one
The one whose hair I touch
And the one whose soul I love.
247 · Mar 2015
For Lily
David Bremner Mar 2015
Let me hear your voice
I dream of you and I
Let me see your smile
You fill my every hour

A scene my mind has painted
Laid out upon my page
Long I have desired
Everything you embody
Never ending dream, never ending girl.
246 · Jan 2017
Snowflakes and You
David Bremner Jan 2017
Snowflakes hang in the air
As though suspended
From invisible cords
And they move my hand

To try and write these words
To describe my love
For you and them, who are
So dear and special

They seem to flit around
In a thousand ways
Caught by the tricks of air
To fill me with joy

Like you, my precious girl
So unique and kind
Lovely as a snowflake
Yet perhaps more rare.
245 · Jan 2017
Free?
David Bremner Jan 2017
Yes, I can think
Therefore, I am
I can know my being
And you can choose to love me

I am thirty
That was the age
Or thereabouts at least
When Roquentin understood

I'm glad he did
He did me good
Through all his suffering
He made it all much clearer

To understand
My existence
The purpose of my life
My responsibility

For I am free
To love or not
And I love you my friend
As I try to give essence

To this my life
Here upon earth
And try to comprehend
The concept of being free
242 · Nov 2016
The Junior Town Planner
David Bremner Nov 2016
The wood panneling and my ears
Reverberate with dullness
Dull men with dull words
Dull ladies as well

I, their understudy, listen
Too familiar phrases
Traffic management, zoning
Policy sixty-nine

While I watch her - the junior
With smouldering hard eyes
And sensuous red lips
Which she runs a biro across.


Written after Highland Council Planning Committee, 29th November 2016.
241 · Oct 2016
Typical Day
David Bremner Oct 2016
Quarter to four
Last minutes of the shift
Feet on the desk
Trying to read Larkin

'Days'
Quite relevant really
But the words dance
Upon the page

Across the desk
A teenage girl
Bangs on about her ****
Larkin is lost.
236 · Sep 2017
Honeymoon in Hull
David Bremner Sep 2017
We came
to Hull

As the Humber flowed
muddy with our romance

By the Docks without trawlers
We laughed
and we loved

Praying forever.
235 · Mar 2015
Summer Study (Haiku)
David Bremner Mar 2015
Summer zephyrs cool
Ice-creams held in children’s hands
Melting shapes and forms
233 · Jun 2016
At Le Select
David Bremner Jun 2016
Pretty girls go by
With feral eyes
Yet none compare
To Felicity

Who sits with me
At Le Select
On the Boulevard Montparnasse
As evening falls

Felicity with whom
I made love
Last night
On the Rue Troyon

As darkness falls
We'll make love
With Paris
From atop the tower

Where a feminine city
Shines like jewels
On a sea of love
True love - ours.
233 · Jul 2016
Night of Rain
David Bremner Jul 2016
A night of rain
with everyone talking about it
And I mean everyone
for it's hammering down

As they fill the hall
for the evening performance
Planned for outside
I take the stage

I and the others
Sweating below lights
And as my eye wanders
I see a forgotten face

There in the rows smiling back
I too quickly smile
Let it be known that I've seen
Then begin to wonder

What fills the mind?
Behind that smile
If I only knew
I'd forget the rain.
230 · Dec 2018
The Cove
David Bremner Dec 2018
Sit for a while
On an ancient piece of sculpted driftwood
Watch the tide turn
By the Point o' Scarden
Under a sky that's as grey
as a gulls' dipped wing.

The sea plays upon millenia of boulders
Listen to its whisper
Here time forgives a life's mistakes.
230 · Oct 2017
At Russell Square Gardens
David Bremner Oct 2017
The leaf. Held on,
despite its withered,
colour-changed state.

Remembering. As autumn
stored away summer's memories
like the squirrels in the gardens.

Grenfell. Westminster Bridge,
Finsbury Park and Borough Market
had tried to steal its greenness.

Then it fell. It fluttered,
on a barely perceivable breeze,
down between some tourists.

I saw it. Settle there,
on the Square's grass, unnoticed,
ready for decay

and the renewal of life.
229 · Dec 2016
The Light of the Flames
David Bremner Dec 2016
Oh come, take your place with me now
Here by the warmth of the fire
Fall into the clutch of my arms
Feel my heart race with desire

For you and your tumbling hair
Your body, your eyes and your smile
Oh come, now remain in my grasp
Our passion has grown for a while

Lets see the light of that fire
Reflect on those locks of your hair
Let it also shine in your eyes
For they are beyond all compare

And let the flame glow on your lips
It serves to enhance their softness
And fall, when I call, deep in love
A love that is blessed with sweet kindness.
227 · Dec 2016
Wick Haiku No. 11
David Bremner Dec 2016
Selling herself short
To those who will never pay
Sunday morning hate
226 · Nov 2016
Pivotal Moment
David Bremner Nov 2016
In an instant
The world seemed changed
As the wind fell
And snowflakes filled the sky

But it was not snow
That changed my world
It was YOU
Your smile, your touch, your love.
225 · Jan 2017
Some Thoughts of You
David Bremner Jan 2017
You are the sunrise
Of a thousand days
And you move my soul
In a thousand ways

I press your picture
Up against my heart
Without your loving
My day cannot start

If you are not here
How I long for you
You fill up my life
Please hear, this is true

As I end this poem
Some say words are cheap
But these ones I mean
My feelings are deep.
224 · Dec 2016
Oil Drum - A 'Minute' Poem.
David Bremner Dec 2016
It sat there and began to leach
out on the beach.
It's spent 'black gold'
brought death so cold
to what poor bird it's plumage found
would well as drowned
as die so slow
what way to go
for something made by God's kind hand.
Now on the sand
an empty shell
and taste of hell.
221 · Sep 2017
Crabbing at Whitby
David Bremner Sep 2017
In Whitby I noticed the teenage girls
who lined the long, Bank Holiday quayside.
Amongst the noise, their young faces serene,
they stood with siblings, step dads, always mam.
The sun shone from their hair - some dark, some blonde,
they wore makeup they did not need.
For the eye is always drawn towards youth.
I noticed too a kind of uniform,
skinny jeans, leggings, flesh revealing tops.
Though it was the lines they held that caught me.

The orange lines that ran from their young hands.
Bright, twisted twine that vanished in the depths
of the inky harbour waters that lay
before them like a still, unlived future.
Crabbing at Whitby, their faces were set
in concentration and female patience.
The patience their grandmothers had needed
when the glass fell and the wind rose at night.
Today though they tended their baited lines,
silent, awaiting the unseen quarry.

Quarry they'd keep in water-filled buckets
of brightly coloured, cheap, cheerful plastic.
To me the whole thing seemed somewhat pointless
competing to see who could catch the most,
catch the biggest of these vicious creatures.
Who'd attack them at every given chance
drawing the blood from their innocent hearts.
Until the metaphor revealed itself.
The girls' lives were now turning like the tide,
the boys like ***** were circling the bait.
219 · Oct 2018
Book Loan
David Bremner Oct 2018
She entered the canteen
With her coffee cup balanced
On a book.

It wasn't so much of a cup
I suppose
One of those shiny metal Thermos things
That don't break if you drop them
I'm rambling, prevaricating.

The book I loaned her
Two days after we met
And beyond eyes and ***
**** and cute turned-up nose
My eyes watched the book

Which she read
Day after day
Across the room.

I'd read it a dozen times
Knew it all by heart
No hurry I'll get it back when your done
I'm off for two weeks on Monday you might have to wait

What is this? Love? Infatuation?
Emotional adultery?
My story inscribing upon her heart?

Or just the slow progression
Of pages turned in the canteen
By her fingertips

Like days
Which I have to endure
To know the ending.




If you can give an answer please comment!!
David Bremner Aug 2019
Sir Richard's tomb in silence sleeps
The day has broken fair
Then tourists come ashore and shout
'I wonder what's in there?'
'Some dust or bones, a skull, a sword?'
I doubt they even care
But others visit Richie's tomb
And stare a silent prayer.
217 · Nov 2016
Those Words
David Bremner Nov 2016
Darling, your words
Dance in the air
Like tiny thistle seeds
Caught in a summer zephyr

I did not think
I'd ever hear
You say, 'I Love You So'
Oh how those words move me now

To return them
Sincerely too
As a bond between us
A bond that never will break.
David Bremner Feb 2017
Let our love flow
Like two burns
Who find their confluence
Within the heart

Then run
Like a mighty river
Tumbling over the rocks
Marrying in the still pools

Finding the sea.
215 · Feb 2015
Lost in the Storm
David Bremner Feb 2015
Rain dries up my tears
Sun drenches my hopes and loves
I'm lost in the storm
David Bremner Nov 2017
Green to gold lie leaves wind strewn
Trod beneath the city's feet
After falling on the benches
Where the office workers meet

The tree itself in spring held bloom
Its boughs so rich with flower
Bursting brightly upon the Square
A peaceful form of power

Unlike the dark metallic bomb
Science built to split the air
Atomic sickness, pain and death
Trees of hope burned with despair

So stand your ground in all seasons
Stand for those who stand for care
And if someone in you sees peace
Then let them stop, stand and stare.
David Bremner Aug 2017
I think I saw
what she saw.
The tide turning by the rocks,
the sea calm in its meeting with the shingle

I think I heard
what she heard.
The millenia witnessed by the rocks,
the children's footsteps crunching down the shingle

I think I knew
what she did not know
That her hair shone, her face was beautiful
as the swallows gathered for depart

and the rocks reflected her serenity.
David Bremner Dec 2016
Felicity sits
on hard concrete
Like a modernists dream
as she plays with a daisy

From Arthur House
I see her pose
As if for a ******
to form an image to keep

Preserving youth
Our own sweet youth
that shines out through her eyes
Mirrored in her English skin

She speaks some words
that may be French
Through the clouds streaks sunlight
She places down the daisy

And then she stands
Straightens her skirt
Lights up a cigarette
and smiles goodbye to this place.
204 · Sep 2017
River Pebble
David Bremner Sep 2017
My river pebble
Through a clear pool
Reflection muddied
I saw you, picked you up

Admiring with my eyes
Your smooth surfaces
Pressing with my fingers
Your hard heart.
203 · Mar 2015
She Said "I Love You"
David Bremner Mar 2015
The eyes flicker
In mutual understanding

The breath quickens
With the suddenness of it all

The mind doubts
For the briefest of moments

Then the walls tumble
As the heart takes over

She said " I love you".
203 · Dec 2018
Commuters
David Bremner Dec 2018
Suburban streets soaked with rain
Self-same journey once again
Along the backs of terraced homes
Council schemes, steeples, domes

This London rush. What's it for?
Another day just like before
Nothing like you likely planned
Then there is the tiny hand

That reaches up to hold on you
Too young to question what we do
If it's madness. If it's sane
Life gone on commuter trains

For her it's simple, not a muddle
She does not step around the puddle
That can and does reflect her face
That in its turn reflects your grace

Suburban streets soaked with rain
Self-same journey once again.
David Bremner Apr 2018
Monday morning murk,
rush-hour standstill.
Faces.
Solemn miles of traffic.
Dacia Duster, Qashqai Two.
Works Traffic Merging Ahead.
Cones.
Toppled idols
of the new religion.
192 · Dec 2016
It is True?
David Bremner Dec 2016
Deep in my eyes
I see you look
And I smile for I know
That you can feel my love

For your eyes shine
In an instant
As we pass, through our gaze
Our feelings for each other

So come sweet love
Lie here with me
Let me in some way try
To reassure your fair heart

That you are not
Alone again
For you are here with me
And that cannot be changed

For love shall be
Ever constant
A force of such power
That no-one can break it down

For in the grasp
Of both our hands
Are gentle, kind, sweet times
Where we will hold each other

Ever more close
Ever more dear
Ever more everything
Tell me now lover, it's true?
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