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Danielle Barlow Mar 2014
I’m not sure what I could do
If it were all up to you.
Would you stay or would you go,
Or never even let me know?

Though our love is very strong,
Do you sense that something is wrong?
Do you feel the way I do?
Every time I think of you.

Every day I love you more,
And mores the fear you’ll close this door.
I just don't think you understand
how I see things and where I stand.
I feel like this one could be better. Do any of you have some suggestions?
Danielle Barlow Mar 2014
As I walk by my self I like to pretend
that what we have never will end.
I close my eyes as the wind brushes against my skin,
and I wish it were you yet again.

When this wind ceases to blow
is when I will stop dreaming of you so.
This wind it comforts me greatly,
but the thought of you still lingers faintly.

This wind is unpredictable, and at times it is jarring,
and yet it still consoles me when you and I are sparring.
At times this wind is as sweet as your kiss,
and never a day will this wind I not miss.
This is one of my favorites :) what do you guys think?
Danielle Barlow Mar 2014
I love you more than words can tell,
without you my life would be hell.
I don't know what I would do,
had I never fallen for you.

You own the key to my heart.
Not until death do we part.
There is still one thing that I must know,
but I just can't get the words to flow.

So tell me now, my dearest friend.
Is our forever coming to an end?
Have I made the deadly mistake,
that has finally caused your love to break?

My love for you is everlasting,
though your feelings seem to be contrasting.
Thy love is sweet on the tongue,
and loudly to the world should be sung.

I hope you will forever be mine.
Because what we have, it's so divine.
So tell me dear, what do you say?
Will you be mine for the rest of your days?
I'm actually very proud of this one..
Danielle Barlow Feb 2014
Why must I do this?
All the pain I cause for you..
It kills me inside.
Oh look, it's a haiku. Kind of pathetic, I know.
Danielle Barlow Feb 2014
I feel like something is very wrong,
but I just can't figure out what.
No one else seems to see what I do.
Maybe it's better they don't know what I go through.

Am I just going crazy?
Everything seems to be going by in a haze.
Nothing seems to be the same as before,
I feel it deep down to my core.

I feel like something is very off,
and I just can't seem to figure it out.
What in the world could it be?
No one seems to feel it but me.

Some people think I'm insane,
but I know what I feel is right.
How do I handle this?
I'm falling further into this dark abyss.
Danielle Barlow Feb 2014
I can do so much more than him,
his future seems so very slim.
His end is going to be slow and grim,
and his chances of survival are none to slim.

He can kiss my ******* ***,
because I have no time for his ******* sass.
I'd like to put him beneath the grass,
and this feeling is never going to pass.
Pardon the language. I used this poem to vent all my anger.
Danielle Barlow Feb 2014
How am I supposed to know,
if away our love he'll throw.
What am I supposed to do,
for a love that's not so new?
Of course he says he loves me so,
but is it true or all for show?

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