18/M Musician who loves writing and reading poetry. Always trying to get better so any comments are appreciated. I enjoy talking about poetry too, I'll read and comment on anybody's poetry who wants feedback, just go ahead and ask 2 followers / 323 words
I studied the shadows on my face, Looking As if I had just remembered Your hardly parted lips And glass eyes that breathe Erasing me with ease, Looking As if you had just remembered When your teeth fell out And your skin crawled From the softest birdsong.
It looked at me Bearing heavy disease, And limped away. Like how the saddest droplet of hot wax Crawls from a white flames strange beauty Falling to a shadow Where it cools, sadder still.