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RhodriWelsh

14/F/Australia I would love it if you would critique my poems

stranger sayeth thoughts fall abandoned forsaken human tis society misadventures whirlpool drowning art shackles owe cast dictates sounds slums adrift hath heavens linger waves souls future children major plates aches rise troubled wonder sky sea apart alas heart escapade tide blinking perpetual constant fills power eardrums corrupt beats mind frown tectonic movement encounter deserted tsunami suffering eye weigh bethink stress searching wherefore vibrate state nations kind nationwide pulsing vast merciful evil darkness continuously mine worry chosen