EyesLikeDesertDunes - Hello Poetry

EyesLikeDesertDunes

EyesLikeDesertDunes

32/M/Not LA Id enjoy some critique, some constructive criticisms and any and all advice to help develop my level of skill and ability. I didn't write these poems myself, but was influenced by psychic ghost agents.

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