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Sep 2014
The details
      
                                                  ­              Leave me
As my time elapsed    

                                                    Know that                  
                                                                ­                 There is no choice in your
                                      Addictions
           ­                                                       
         ­                                                            That my creation
Is better than
                                                                ­  Reality

                                                      ­                                    And I can't promise
All the pieces



But

                                              You'­ll enjoy
                                               The noise
This is the unfinished "Black Out" poem I wrote for my class. It uses song lyrics from Slipknot and Jason Mraz. Let me know what you think about the positioning of the words. Too hard to read?
LittleFreeBird
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