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Oct 2017
she slips in silently
seeking sanctuary, and
every step is a prayer.

step.
father, forgive me for I have sinned.
step.
father, forgive me for I have...
step.
deaf god, dead god.

too many horizons hold his heart
he is hardened and headstrong, yet
every step is a prayer.

right.
father? forgive me for?
left.
father, forgive me for...
right.
deaf god, dead god.

we won't wake to weeping
walking with our veils pulled tight
over eyes, and we know it. maybe
every step is a prayer.

clack.
father, forgive me.
thump.
father, forgive --
creak.
father?
stop.
do you hear me?
one.
deaf god
stomp.
dead god
three.
father?
do you hear me?
Assignment for my creative writing class. We had to write a poem using different sound devices and base it off an artwork. This is my poem for Noberto Roldan's installation, "Archangel".
Sofia Paderes
Written by
Sofia Paderes  The Philippine Islands
(The Philippine Islands)   
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   Carlo C Gomez
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