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"semeniuk" poems
THE BEAUTIFUL FACE MATLOOB BOKHARI I saw a moving full moon over the sea Then I saw the face of a maiden I stopped and said, “Moon is fair But the sweet magic of her face is Fairer far, which attracted my eyes Captured my heart and won my soul. Moon tries to imitate hr face and Rose tries to copy her lips in vain! She is beautiful,she is most beautiful!" Niamh Dada Land Lovely friend. Many Blessings Michele Vizzotti-White I totally like the first one, it was vivid and I saw how the rose must have felt, they r both awesome and fanciful, a maiden more fair than the moon wow that is a powerful statement, the 1st one reminds me of a painting the second one a song of love, both lovely though Demelia Denton Lovely written words Matloob Bokhari Barbara Shoetaker And is this fair woman still the one who stole you heart? Semeniuk Carole you know how much I love your poetry . your stories .. the way in which only you can tell it ~~ thank you my long time friend, Matloob Bokhari .. wishing you well .. alwayS ! ina Farnworth What a beautiful verse Matloob, thank you so much for Connie Hofacker Hemmerich Senter Thank you, for sharing this lovely poem, Matloob.
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Oct 18, 2014
Oct 18, 2014 at 3:38 AM UTC
THE BEAUTIFUL FACE
THE BEAUTIFUL FACE MATLOOB BOKHARI I saw a moving full moon over the sea Then I saw the face of a maiden I stopped and said, “Moon is fair But the sweet magic of her face is Fairer far, which attracted my eyes Captured my heart and won my soul. Moon tries to imitate hr face and Rose tries to copy her lips in vain! She is beautiful,she is most beautiful!" Niamh Dada Land Lovely friend. Many Blessings Michele Vizzotti-White I totally like the first one, it was vivid and I saw how the rose must have felt, they r both awesome and fanciful, a maiden more fair than the moon wow that is a powerful statement, the 1st one reminds me of a painting the second one a song of love, both lovely though Demelia Denton Lovely written words Matloob Bokhari Barbara Shoetaker And is this fair woman still the one who stole you heart? Semeniuk Carole you know how much I love your poetry . your stories .. the way in which only you can tell it ~~ thank you my long time friend, Matloob Bokhari .. wishing you well .. alwayS ! ina Farnworth What a beautiful verse Matloob, thank you so much for Connie Hofacker Hemmerich Senter Thank you, for sharing this lovely poem, Matloob.
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Oct 19, 2014
Oct 19, 2014 at 10:15 PM UTC
THE BEAUTIFUL FACE
AN ODE TO A BABY MATLOOB BOKHARI I saw a baby in a valley wet with dews Standing in the wholesome herbs And flowers of fresh hues Plain air was ruffling her hair She was honey sweet and a pure chaste lily No bee has ****** her; no wasp has stung her The valley was alive with the music of stream With flowers so various, so beautiful, so new, So stunning sunlit blue sky, so sweet cool breeze In the valley , the baby was the most delightful flower I praised her with all my heart and with all my mind O sweet heaven, lucky will be the one Who will pass his life with you! Few moments in the valley have made a forever memory Still smell perfume of her beauty when lay awake at night The baby even to date brightens up my soul with her smiles Semeniuk Carole Matloob Bokhari . that is a huge compliment coming from such a worldly writer as you my friend .. .. thank you . You've such a gift ; you are talented; and we are blessed to have the privilege of hearing your stories; experiences; dreams; thoughts ~~ indeed we are .. .. happy weekend my friend PEACE Demelia Denton My goodness Matloob ... so many expressive words you write ... A great mind for words ... very nice Sandra Delussu something worth to keep in your eyes. thanks Matloob Rebecca Longan I love this my friend Matloob Bokhari Christy Noel Feddersen My Grandma Feddersen (God rest her soul) used to call me "Flower". She said I was the first little flower of the Lord. She was wise and filled with Spirit, and taught me many things. I have been thinking a lot about her lately, and this reminded me that she is always with me. Thank you. Debbie Tripp · Friends with Christy Noel Feddersen She is always with you Sunshine \ Sand Tucker Lovely write. It carried me back to when my children were actually children. A sweet journey. Thank you. Karyn Walker I tried to send you what I saw, in your manuscript, dear brother Matloob. From my heart to yours. Stunning lines.
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Oct 24, 2014
Oct 24, 2014 at 11:12 AM UTC
AN ODE TO A BABY
AN ODE TO A BABY MATLOOB BOKHARI I saw a baby in a valley wet with dews Standing in the wholesome herbs And flowers of fresh hues Plain air was ruffling her hair She was honey sweet and a pure chaste lily No bee has ****** her; no wasp has stung her The valley was alive with the music of stream With flowers so various, so beautiful, so new, So stunning sunlit blue sky, so sweet cool breeze In the valley , the baby was the most delightful flower I praised her with all my heart and with all my mind O sweet heaven, lucky will be the one Who will pass his life with you! Few moments in the valley have made a forever memory Still smell perfume of her beauty when lay awake at night The baby even to date brightens up my soul with her smiles Semeniuk Carole Matloob Bokhari . that is a huge compliment coming from such a worldly writer as you my friend .. .. thank you . You've such a gift ; you are talented; and we are blessed to have the privilege of hearing your stories; experiences; dreams; thoughts ~~ indeed we are .. .. happy weekend my friend PEACE Demelia Denton My goodness Matloob ... so many expressive words you write ... A great mind for words ... very nice Sandra Delussu something worth to keep in your eyes. thanks Matloob Rebecca Longan I love this my friend Matloob Bokhari Christy Noel Feddersen My Grandma Feddersen (God rest her soul) used to call me "Flower". She said I was the first little flower of the Lord. She was wise and filled with Spirit, and taught me many things. I have been thinking a lot about her lately, and this reminded me that she is always with me. Thank you. Debbie Tripp · Friends with Christy Noel Feddersen She is always with you Sunshine \ Sand Tucker Lovely write. It carried me back to when my children were actually children. A sweet journey. Thank you. Karyn Walker I tried to send you what I saw, in your manuscript, dear brother Matloob. From my heart to yours. Stunning lines.
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