"recomendation" poems - Hello Poetry

Life is all about turn about Trouble can capture you in an instant ain't that true? What would you do if only a peom was a logical way to express emotional greaditude and convey a message of that and this love is only hopeful if giving live and a good foundation my recomendation is love yourself first and love will follow and find you in a better mental place you are your only hope for survival and your rival will fall in your thoughts and focus on you its all you have! Focus

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Mar 8, 2013

Mar 8, 2013 at 1:21 PM UTC

eddie-cunningham

FOCUS

Life is all about turn about Trouble can capture you in an instant ain't that true? What would you do if only a peom was a logical way to express emotional greaditude and convey a message of that and this love is only hopeful if giving live and a good foundation my recomendation is love yourself first and love will follow and find you in a better mental place you are your only hope for survival and your rival will fall in your thoughts and focus on you its all you have! Focus

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I. It is beginning to be whispered now. II. "She's sick," and indeed they're right. III. Spilling it like spilled coffee the world's most used psychoactive they all scatter in awkward worry for safety of someone they care nothing for. IV. Do they really believe that I am a different human being then I have been for two years now you know I'm sick V. Because I am ill because I cannot eat sometimes and others cannot stop because my body cannot get enough food it doesn't know how to process half the things I put in. VI. Because I am ill because I cannot sleep sometimes and others cannot stop because my body cannot get enough rest it doesn't know how to shut off the thoughts and sink. VII. I get asked "Do you have an eating disorder?" because I am so skinny there is nothing to me I am not more then Ninety-eight pounds on a good day I have never been one hundred. VIII. No. I do not have an eating disorder.

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Mar 2, 2014

Mar 2, 2014 at 9:06 PM UTC

Steven-Muir

In the recomendation to never mention your Lyme disease

I. It is beginning to be whispered now. II. "She's sick," and indeed they're right. III. Spilling it like spilled coffee the world's most used psychoactive they all scatter in awkward worry for safety of someone they care nothing for. IV. Do they really believe that I am a different human being then I have been for two years now you know I'm sick V. Because I am ill because I cannot eat sometimes and others cannot stop because my body cannot get enough food it doesn't know how to process half the things I put in. VI. Because I am ill because I cannot sleep sometimes and others cannot stop because my body cannot get enough rest it doesn't know how to shut off the thoughts and sink. VII. I get asked "Do you have an eating disorder?" because I am so skinny there is nothing to me I am not more then Ninety-eight pounds on a good day I have never been one hundred. VIII. No. I do not have an eating disorder.

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Could I make a recomendation Said the woman to me I recommend you let go, move on Life goes on living, sorry i continied to look at the floor Then went about my day This is what I thought Of those words she had to say I recomend That I can change the past I made a different decision There never was a crash I recomend he never left that day Told me he had a problem He needed help do whatever it takes I recomend she never went down there She came right home from school We're doing each others hair And I recomend To never let them go Keep them near your sight Memorize everyday She gave her recomemdation She just didnt know Each moment makes you remember Their never ever coming home.

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Mar 24, 2013

Mar 24, 2013 at 8:15 PM UTC

goddess-tonya-medrano

a recomendation 2/18/05

Could I make a recomendation Said the woman to me I recommend you let go, move on Life goes on living, sorry i continied to look at the floor Then went about my day This is what I thought Of those words she had to say I recomend That I can change the past I made a different decision There never was a crash I recomend he never left that day Told me he had a problem He needed help do whatever it takes I recomend she never went down there She came right home from school We're doing each others hair And I recomend To never let them go Keep them near your sight Memorize everyday She gave her recomemdation She just didnt know Each moment makes you remember Their never ever coming home.

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