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Naalala ko noon, Hindi tayo nagpapansinan, Hindi tayo nagkikibuan, Hindi tayo naguusap, Lumilipas nga siguro ang isang araw na wala tayong pinaguusapan. Pero hindi mo lang alam kung gaano kita gustong mahagkan, masilayan, mahaplos ang iyong mga kamay. Noong mga araw na kapiling pa kita. Hindi mo alam kung gaano kita kamahal, kasi abalang abala ka sa ibang bagay. katulad nalang ng 'katext' mo Hindi mo alam kung gaano kita gustong kausapin. Hindi mo alam yun. Hindi. Hindi. Kaya ngayong wala kana :( tanging hiling ko lang naman kay bathala ngayon ay ang: Ibalik ang lahat. Ibalik ka nya. Ibalik ang mga araw na gusto kita yakapin. Ibalik ang mga araw na gusto kita hagkan. Ibalik ang mga araw na gusto kita kausapin. Pero alam kong malabo pa sa mata ng mga lola natin na mangyare ang ganung bagay. Kaya, eto ako. Kontentong kinakausap ka sa PUNTOD mo. Niyayakap ka sa Hangin. Kinakausap ka sa Dasal. Iniiyakan t'wing sasapit ang hating gabi. Hinahalikan ang LAPIDA sa PUNTOD mo. Pero alam kong alam mo na. Kung gaano kita gusto ng makasama ullit :'( Alam kong alam mo na. Gusto na kitang sundan dyan. pero hindi pa. Hindi pa. Hindi pa NGAYON. Dahil naasa akong, MABUBUO TAYO ULIT DI MAN DITO SA LUPA KUNDI SA KABILANG MUNDO #newbie #IMissMyMom
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Jan 8, 2016
Jan 8, 2016 at 8:37 AM UTC
Paalam Na
~~~ “To exist is to change, to change is to mature, to mature is to go on creating oneself endlessly.”  Henri Bergson well in that case, I’m either the most immature teen here, or Rip Van Winkle the re-creation process is six, nearly seven, decades long (you thot days, ha, no way), can’t recall the last name I called myself the delving, the researching, the forgetting, the fifty first dates of no short term memory, the checkdown, throwback Thursday of did I write that? no recollect, the pretense of prehensile strength to touch you and me simultaneously might, could be true, if you claim I authored it, ok with me and all that life taught me this, the one who oft  hangs around very young kids learns a lot, and soon recognizes maturity indeed endless but not senseless just a poem-of-the-day process indeed every sense says the minute difference between this morning and this approaching midnight, an opportunity to grow up, stand straighter, uprighter, write down my failures one more time, cause that is the sterling hallmark impressed upon thyself, ourselves, that is genuine maturity, the courageous wisdom to start all over again the clock has transgressed, moving past the 12:00am digits, which for cause makes me giddy, it’s permission to write a new one, of course, maturely thinking I still got one within, a newbie, an aged day-old brand new baby, a poem, of course god bless, I’m all grown n’ growled up, with wisdom to know I don’t got nada, but own the immature youthful courage of maturity, to keep on trying, endlessly, being your obedient-servant ~~~ *p.s. this is kind of love poem of thanksgivings, a love poem with no misgivings, a thank you for the fragments of sharing - hold so dear, the best reason to mature, the best reason to change, the best reason to write right now, here comes the mojo my newest oldest friend, reminding for the last and first time that I’m all growed, using the bigliest words I’ve known to say baby, hey baby, good night good morning write us a poem, a thank you note, from one who blessedly forgets his name, day in and year out* For that guy, you, that ancient kid, That poet-in-retrograde so rewrite the title, a refresh, are you immature enough to write? 1:12am ~for the crew~
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Apr 18, 2019
Apr 18, 2019 at 1:28 AM UTC
Are you (im)mature? The best reason to write
~~~ “To exist is to change, to change is to mature, to mature is to go on creating oneself endlessly.”  Henri Bergson well in that case, I’m either the most immature teen here, or Rip Van Winkle the re-creation process is six, nearly seven, decades long (you thot days, ha, no way), can’t recall the last name I called myself the delving, the researching, the forgetting, the fifty first dates of no short term memory, the checkdown, throwback Thursday of did I write that? no recollect, the pretense of prehensile strength to touch you and me simultaneously might, could be true, if you claim I authored it, ok with me and all that life taught me this, the one who oft  hangs around very young kids learns a lot, and soon recognizes maturity indeed endless but not senseless just a poem-of-the-day process indeed every sense says the minute difference between this morning and this approaching midnight, an opportunity to grow up, stand straighter, uprighter, write down my failures one more time, cause that is the sterling hallmark impressed upon thyself, ourselves, that is genuine maturity, the courageous wisdom to start all over again the clock has transgressed, moving past the 12:00am digits, which for cause makes me giddy, it’s permission to write a new one, of course, maturely thinking I still got one within, a newbie, an aged day-old brand new baby, a poem, of course god bless, I’m all grown n’ growled up, with wisdom to know I don’t got nada, but own the immature youthful courage of maturity, to keep on trying, endlessly, being your obedient-servant ~~~ *p.s. this is kind of love poem of thanksgivings, a love poem with no misgivings, a thank you for the fragments of sharing - hold so dear, the best reason to mature, the best reason to change, the best reason to write right now, here comes the mojo my newest oldest friend, reminding for the last and first time that I’m all growed, using the bigliest words I’ve known to say baby, hey baby, good night good morning write us a poem, a thank you note, from one who blessedly forgets his name, day in and year out* For that guy, you, that ancient kid, That poet-in-retrograde so rewrite the title, a refresh, are you immature enough to write? 1:12am ~for the crew~
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Wrote this eons ago, tonight, once more, spend some human capital, editing... Something to think about as we tuck ourselves in. the young'uns keep on asking me for tips, secrets, to this art, magical poetry gig, as if I had any left unrevealed.   recalled this old'n, from a vintage poetry year, as a suggestion, a stating-starting place, for young poets: do not self-chain, let the words take you where they lead, write them up for the rhyme is waiting, in the heart chest deep down, not on the screen. I read you Goodnight Moon, Falling asleep beside you. <•> People stop rhyming... When first you overcome your fears, And dare to put on paper your tears, Give it up, set yourself free from the shackles, Of thinking a rhyme is a necessity for a Rooting tooting writing of a **** good poem or a barrel of crackles If you feel lost, Want to share the cost, Feel not bossed, By a newbie's need to believe that if it rhymes Everyone will like your poem Just fine And if you get past this stage, And advance to the next page, Do not think that writing down a sentence of Your mind's first up, innermost thoughts, Is something that will make you Less lost, heralded, worthy of a parade, And be blessed with an A   In your Teacher's pet grade book My heart broke. I feel bad. I feel sad Cause my man/woman left me And I hope Someone kicks his or her *** That Ain't No Poem Neither... And if you can't help but complain repeatedly How life ***** and you're feeling blue extremely indiscreetly, Don't make me try on your scribblings intimately indiscriminately, Read a million, even wrote a few myself You think you can write? Then employ a word outside your comfort zone, Go it alone, Write just four sentences that will make The hopeful reader stand up and you, Twice as much, and shout **Hallelujah ******* Work. Poetry is work. Hard work. Don't fret. But, think on it. Let it come easy, then let it rest,. Then spend days editing every comma, And when you love it so much, You are chest busting bursting, Why have you not pressed Send already? Have the sweetest dreams. In the morning, when you but awake, A poem will be aborning in thy mind, And dare I say it, you will find a new freedom In free verse. (I know you will slip in a rhyme or two, I can't help but do it too) G' nite!
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Jul 9, 2013
Jul 9, 2013 at 10:17 PM UTC
People, Stop Rhyming...(July 2013)
Wrote this eons ago, tonight, once more, spend some human capital, editing... Something to think about as we tuck ourselves in. the young'uns keep on asking me for tips, secrets, to this art, magical poetry gig, as if I had any left unrevealed.   recalled this old'n, from a vintage poetry year, as a suggestion, a stating-starting place, for young poets: do not self-chain, let the words take you where they lead, write them up for the rhyme is waiting, in the heart chest deep down, not on the screen. I read you Goodnight Moon, Falling asleep beside you. <•> People stop rhyming... When first you overcome your fears, And dare to put on paper your tears, Give it up, set yourself free from the shackles, Of thinking a rhyme is a necessity for a Rooting tooting writing of a **** good poem or a barrel of crackles If you feel lost, Want to share the cost, Feel not bossed, By a newbie's need to believe that if it rhymes Everyone will like your poem Just fine And if you get past this stage, And advance to the next page, Do not think that writing down a sentence of Your mind's first up, innermost thoughts, Is something that will make you Less lost, heralded, worthy of a parade, And be blessed with an A   In your Teacher's pet grade book My heart broke. I feel bad. I feel sad Cause my man/woman left me And I hope Someone kicks his or her *** That Ain't No Poem Neither... And if you can't help but complain repeatedly How life ***** and you're feeling blue extremely indiscreetly, Don't make me try on your scribblings intimately indiscriminately, Read a million, even wrote a few myself You think you can write? Then employ a word outside your comfort zone, Go it alone, Write just four sentences that will make The hopeful reader stand up and you, Twice as much, and shout **Hallelujah ******* Work. Poetry is work. Hard work. Don't fret. But, think on it. Let it come easy, then let it rest,. Then spend days editing every comma, And when you love it so much, You are chest busting bursting, Why have you not pressed Send already? Have the sweetest dreams. In the morning, when you but awake, A poem will be aborning in thy mind, And dare I say it, you will find a new freedom In free verse. (I know you will slip in a rhyme or two, I can't help but do it too) G' nite!
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It was hard to miss Jerry in the corner holding court over the bran muffin. Flurries of judgement and wisdom flying across coffee dappled pages as he sentenced a large cup of Paruvian Dark Roast to be ****** 7 am Dan never flinched steeling his tenured chair at a spot one section of stir sticks away calculably just out of reach of the regularly scheduled tantrum. An auburn-haired newbie fanes camoflage peeking over two pages of Obituaries she never intended to read. Her raised and nearly detached eyebrows hover above the dateline like a magic trick. And on every table fall scattered leaves of press print trees unsorted and littered with intent by careless absorbers of trivia. Disconnected ear-budded footnotes of humanity see nothing hear nothing using the disarrayed World News as enormous coasters unmoved by hyper-ventilating compulsives pushing panic buttons through desperate quests to uncover one alphabetically organized set of local news. Of the papers not strewn the remnant holds anxious on a distant wall a throng of flopping rabbit-eared step children dangling precariously from unaccomodating magazine racks like smoky orphans from windows in a fiery building. Disordered. Disrespected. Discarded...words are Jews in the holocaust. Death of a voice. We are irreverent in our silence diminishing genius through apathy put off by the imposition to be challenged choosing disposable principles above responsible knowledge. Everything is disposable - cameras, cars, relationships, loyalty, babies...and wisdom - crumpling Pulitzer prize authors and discarding WW2 veterans just to get to the cartoons.
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Apr 30, 2014
Apr 30, 2014 at 11:15 PM UTC
Daily News and Disrespect
It was hard to miss Jerry in the corner holding court over the bran muffin. Flurries of judgement and wisdom flying across coffee dappled pages as he sentenced a large cup of Paruvian Dark Roast to be ****** 7 am Dan never flinched steeling his tenured chair at a spot one section of stir sticks away calculably just out of reach of the regularly scheduled tantrum. An auburn-haired newbie fanes camoflage peeking over two pages of Obituaries she never intended to read. Her raised and nearly detached eyebrows hover above the dateline like a magic trick. And on every table fall scattered leaves of press print trees unsorted and littered with intent by careless absorbers of trivia. Disconnected ear-budded footnotes of humanity see nothing hear nothing using the disarrayed World News as enormous coasters unmoved by hyper-ventilating compulsives pushing panic buttons through desperate quests to uncover one alphabetically organized set of local news. Of the papers not strewn the remnant holds anxious on a distant wall a throng of flopping rabbit-eared step children dangling precariously from unaccomodating magazine racks like smoky orphans from windows in a fiery building. Disordered. Disrespected. Discarded...words are Jews in the holocaust. Death of a voice. We are irreverent in our silence diminishing genius through apathy put off by the imposition to be challenged choosing disposable principles above responsible knowledge. Everything is disposable - cameras, cars, relationships, loyalty, babies...and wisdom - crumpling Pulitzer prize authors and discarding WW2 veterans just to get to the cartoons.
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the newbie failure complex(ity) the poems come torrentially, hurricane, waterfall & tornado are working adjectives worthy of the task, yet unequal to the unlimited army of the written dead of unread poems and poets that occupy the nether of blog, podcast, and poetry sites, orphan stars in the un-salvaged junkyard galaxy of verbiage a faceless wight, once alive, now permanently dead, we shuffle march, chanting each our own newbie poem, onward soldiers to ignominy and glory so fleeting, we are forgot before we are remembered *this is life in poetry, or better yet, the worst of it, (sigh) this is the poetry of lives* all for nought, nought for all, at least we pass our prison time in the company of fellow strugglers*
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May 13, 2019
May 13, 2019 at 5:44 PM UTC
the newbie failure complex(ity)/the poetry of lives
Those people who thinks of themselves as the ultimate Thinking that they are those who create A world without even a single flaw For they bark and scratch you with a claw As if you're the most putrid human they've seen As if this phase was a place they've never been If I may remind you You became a newbie once too So don't talk to me as if You became the GREATEST In just a blink of an eye
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Mar 19, 2015
Mar 19, 2015 at 9:53 AM UTC
The unruly bunch of cows
*everyday chores wake eye-crusted weep hoping to free-falling freedom maybe splash words of encouragement let them dry *untowled and untrammeled upon expressionless lips* routinize squeeze *out the poem reforming repeatedly* write of everyday chores sleep go to, to go, *half awarding awaring that newbie tears new pooling will by morn old crusting creating and everyday chores never ending I am earth crusted no matter how deep daily* dug the untitled everyday chores
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Jan 25, 2015
Jan 25, 2015 at 8:07 AM UTC
EveryDay Chores Untitled
Like whisky to a newbie She said *** with her is so amazing, Should her lovers take her words for granted?   to the echo chamber, an invitation of uncertainty awaits on the others side of love. Just like any property a ****** is still a risky investment Just like any investment could be,   Another extremely shameless plug As she pumps up the volume, Like a female rebel on the run from the law They love everything about this Island beauty Like whisky to a newbie, her poetic euphoric vibes   take them higher and higher, as her fans dance the night away https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jgf_I9vepDo
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Feb 20, 2016
Feb 20, 2016 at 5:16 PM UTC
Like whisky to a newbie,
Been on this forum just a short time Found amazing talent from all kinds Makes me wanna dub this creative flow As the greatest ever, if you don’t know Thus my admiration has been sparked To write mad verses with a flaming mark You are the ingredients of this unique brew That I’m now calling the “Quintessence” crew So here’s to the “Q,” your words have weight More than silver and gold, ’cause you’re my mates Here’s to the eyez of earth’s celestial Angel X-raying minds to diagnose and become less tangled Here’s to the fury of the beast, a.k.a. Animal Ripping at the life we sometimes take for granted Here’s to the western gunslinger, holla Pug Blasting us with the creativity from them slugs Here’s to the sweetness of sista Sara Walking the mule as a humane barer Here’s to the Feminine heart of a special Poet Grounding us to reality, a toast from a glass of Moet Here’s to the petals from the Y2K1 budding Rose Missing the nectar to feed the bees and in those… Here’s to the shiny armor of gleaming love, the Arhanghell Giving us adventurous tales, ready to drop more coins in that well Here’s to the food from the Miller they call Keith Dropping them verses like tender, tantalizing beef Here’s to the endeavors of the newbie, a Creator of Love Soaring the clouds fiercely with the freshness of a dove Other members of the “Q” are still missing in action Hope you come back to be part of this elite faction So this dedication will continue to be unfinished Not whole, but waiting to be no longer diminished…
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Jul 23, 2013
Jul 23, 2013 at 10:09 PM UTC
Quintessence Crew
Been on this forum just a short time Found amazing talent from all kinds Makes me wanna dub this creative flow As the greatest ever, if you don’t know Thus my admiration has been sparked To write mad verses with a flaming mark You are the ingredients of this unique brew That I’m now calling the “Quintessence” crew So here’s to the “Q,” your words have weight More than silver and gold, ’cause you’re my mates Here’s to the eyez of earth’s celestial Angel X-raying minds to diagnose and become less tangled Here’s to the fury of the beast, a.k.a. Animal Ripping at the life we sometimes take for granted Here’s to the western gunslinger, holla Pug Blasting us with the creativity from them slugs Here’s to the sweetness of sista Sara Walking the mule as a humane barer Here’s to the Feminine heart of a special Poet Grounding us to reality, a toast from a glass of Moet Here’s to the petals from the Y2K1 budding Rose Missing the nectar to feed the bees and in those… Here’s to the shiny armor of gleaming love, the Arhanghell Giving us adventurous tales, ready to drop more coins in that well Here’s to the food from the Miller they call Keith Dropping them verses like tender, tantalizing beef Here’s to the endeavors of the newbie, a Creator of Love Soaring the clouds fiercely with the freshness of a dove Other members of the “Q” are still missing in action Hope you come back to be part of this elite faction So this dedication will continue to be unfinished Not whole, but waiting to be no longer diminished…
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As a newbie, we are unaware We go through life as if we care Incompetent inept go here or there Thinking that we know it all Inevitably comes the fall Then we slowly realize As it begins, the End of our demise we didn’t compromise However, it’s more Than just the fall. We thought We were Impervious 10 feet tall. The older we get The more we realize The ignorant follies Of the less wise Pride before the fall Comes towards us all We paid no mind To the warnings call Greed, Lust, A wild ride Envy Wrath Look inside Gluttony, Sloth, Our  Guilty Pride Don’t let this list Be your guide It’s OK not to know everything It’s OK to be a teen in between It’s OK to misread a panic scene It’s OK to admit your wrong Do the dance, Sing the song Don’t act wise, Apologize Pretending you know it all Inevitably The jig is up Never ready For the call Will you learn the lesson of the fall knowing you don’t know anything at all. There is always a lesson. To endure It’s OK not to be sure we were all once an amateur The difference between a young adult Sprung on life And a middle aged Disillusion lost soul Is  our experiences The lessons learned When It’s your turn To be on top Oblivious Ignorant Acceptance There will be a time When you’re not It’s not how high You climb It’s how you endure After the fall Wisdom comes to us all Will you ignore it? Or answer Life’s call Inspired songs; My life 1978 Billy Joel Don’t fear the reaper 1976 Blue Oyster Cult Signs 1971 By  Five Electrical Band Bridge over troubled Waters 1970 By Simon and Garfunkel Both sides now 1969 By Joni Mitchell Foot note This was written for a seventh grade grandchild going through life on stress levels. She creates herself. She says this to herself now it’s OK to be wrong. I don’t have to know everything. I’ve always said to the grandchildren, you have two ears, and one mouth listen twice as much as you speak
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May 15, 2025
May 15, 2025 at 3:49 AM UTC
Amateur From Dr. Seuss to Confucius
As a newbie, we are unaware We go through life as if we care Incompetent inept go here or there Thinking that we know it all Inevitably comes the fall Then we slowly realize As it begins, the End of our demise we didn’t compromise However, it’s more Than just the fall. We thought We were Impervious 10 feet tall. The older we get The more we realize The ignorant follies Of the less wise Pride before the fall Comes towards us all We paid no mind To the warnings call Greed, Lust, A wild ride Envy Wrath Look inside Gluttony, Sloth, Our  Guilty Pride Don’t let this list Be your guide It’s OK not to know everything It’s OK to be a teen in between It’s OK to misread a panic scene It’s OK to admit your wrong Do the dance, Sing the song Don’t act wise, Apologize Pretending you know it all Inevitably The jig is up Never ready For the call Will you learn the lesson of the fall knowing you don’t know anything at all. There is always a lesson. To endure It’s OK not to be sure we were all once an amateur The difference between a young adult Sprung on life And a middle aged Disillusion lost soul Is  our experiences The lessons learned When It’s your turn To be on top Oblivious Ignorant Acceptance There will be a time When you’re not It’s not how high You climb It’s how you endure After the fall Wisdom comes to us all Will you ignore it? Or answer Life’s call Inspired songs; My life 1978 Billy Joel Don’t fear the reaper 1976 Blue Oyster Cult Signs 1971 By  Five Electrical Band Bridge over troubled Waters 1970 By Simon and Garfunkel Both sides now 1969 By Joni Mitchell Foot note This was written for a seventh grade grandchild going through life on stress levels. She creates herself. She says this to herself now it’s OK to be wrong. I don’t have to know everything. I’ve always said to the grandchildren, you have two ears, and one mouth listen twice as much as you speak
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You were a newbie to a city and caught my eye when you stepped off the trolley. Had to know **** lady all sailors and suits were falling all over each other to assist. Call me your stalker, followed you as you stood there gazing like a child at H. Plaza.   Needing to know my vision wasn't flawed had to pinch myself and Betty you were real. Watching Ms. Betty Ponder's hips swaying taking that stage was a real treat for eyes. Felt like the butcher and you walked only for me, no need to haggle you get it for free. Best and proudest times for me was hearing you make all songs old and new great. Loved singing along with you belting songs written before your time and tapping feet. Looking in your gorgeous eyes I still see that special lady with all the qualities I desire. Nobody can hide or extinguish that bright light that shines in you one whom I love. I never needed to know where you came from but loved knowing where you were going. You lovely Pet are a once in a lifetime enigma that most people can't begin to figure out.
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Nov 3, 2013
Nov 3, 2013 at 4:28 AM UTC
The Unforgettable Short One
When you come away from home you can be one of many things: A **** A partyanimal A geek A talker A listener A doer A drinker A social recluse An alcohol abuser A hustler A bustler A fanatic A panicker A best friend waiting to be discovered A great lover in the cupboard The list goes on But we are all one thing: A fresher A newbie A greenhorn Streetfighters Run up quarterbacks Soldiers of Fortune. And I realise it can be hard With everything going on Trying everything new Trying to make friends We can sometimes get caught up And lose our field of vision. If I could give one piece of advice It would be: Be who you are. Standup for what you believe in – People always come round to respecting that If you don’t do shots Drink beer If you don’t like **** Pass on it in a dignified manner. I once knew a guy who lost his field of vision: He ended up firing a rifle out of a second-storey window Trying to hit the centre of the O’s on roadsigns. It might have been the exuberant amount of alcohol He had consumed that night. I just don’t know.
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Nov 11, 2011
Nov 11, 2011 at 3:47 PM UTC
Field of Vision
strange enough, that word choice, ****** for they are all, (or mostly) men they get on their knees, so eager to please write a poem, newbie, they will be your partner pretenders, instant followers but the trick employed is transference they want you bad to worship them, that being the purest of their false intentions, their oldest trick, guilt, "if I follow you, you should follow me!" their kiss Pass laden with std's, they want implanted in your hp inbox The std is vanity. what they need, what they want you to imbibe, is their world view, poetry-is-by-the-numbers the number of followers, (how I detest that word) the number of reads, oft manipulated, by cyber techno b.s. so understand, this craft, you may have chosen, is work, so hard, because it comes from the gut, wrenching pressing issues inside you it is about everything you want us to understand about you, your vision peculiar, without revealing your rawest self so obviously know this in advance each poem has a unique audience, as unique as you years took me, took me to grasp this simply complex notion, over come myself within myself, that self-same infection that audience is you write to please yourself, be your harshest critic, popularity will find you your truths, withour pandering, will finds the seekers, the quality lovers, the truth hungerers they will find you, of that, be assured amidst the millions of words, yours are yours, fear not the plaintive worry, are they any good? for the courage to post yourself, is the very self same answer to that, the bells toll for thee if it pleased you, pained you, enough that you released into this world, in poem form, it is good enough poetry is ego no question, but keep yourself on the right side of the line, separating your ego from the egotist, and your poetry will no question, forever live, a mark of you upon the world let us be brothers, let us be sisters, David and Jonathan, Ruth and Naomi, but not Cain and Abel, no anger, no jealousy, just raw, refined, truth, the truth of you, which cannot be diminished by enumeration, cannot be counted, only blessed
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Nov 16, 2014
Nov 16, 2014 at 11:55 AM UTC
Poetry ****** (each poem has a unique audience)
strange enough, that word choice, ****** for they are all, (or mostly) men they get on their knees, so eager to please write a poem, newbie, they will be your partner pretenders, instant followers but the trick employed is transference they want you bad to worship them, that being the purest of their false intentions, their oldest trick, guilt, "if I follow you, you should follow me!" their kiss Pass laden with std's, they want implanted in your hp inbox The std is vanity. what they need, what they want you to imbibe, is their world view, poetry-is-by-the-numbers the number of followers, (how I detest that word) the number of reads, oft manipulated, by cyber techno b.s. so understand, this craft, you may have chosen, is work, so hard, because it comes from the gut, wrenching pressing issues inside you it is about everything you want us to understand about you, your vision peculiar, without revealing your rawest self so obviously know this in advance each poem has a unique audience, as unique as you years took me, took me to grasp this simply complex notion, over come myself within myself, that self-same infection that audience is you write to please yourself, be your harshest critic, popularity will find you your truths, withour pandering, will finds the seekers, the quality lovers, the truth hungerers they will find you, of that, be assured amidst the millions of words, yours are yours, fear not the plaintive worry, are they any good? for the courage to post yourself, is the very self same answer to that, the bells toll for thee if it pleased you, pained you, enough that you released into this world, in poem form, it is good enough poetry is ego no question, but keep yourself on the right side of the line, separating your ego from the egotist, and your poetry will no question, forever live, a mark of you upon the world let us be brothers, let us be sisters, David and Jonathan, Ruth and Naomi, but not Cain and Abel, no anger, no jealousy, just raw, refined, truth, the truth of you, which cannot be diminished by enumeration, cannot be counted, only blessed
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His Grandpa writes poetry in the tub. (See the banner photo, please) His Grandpa writes poetry in the tub, Clearly a skill and ability that has been passed to the next generation. For who could conceive successfully Of writing something so exquisitely Joyful as his smile, A poem par excellence! I am sure it is but a matter of Days and weeks, After the newbie begins to post His œuvres écrites, Here on HP, That the debate will commence Who is the better poet sweet? No worries. My conceit has already conceded.
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Oct 31, 2013
Oct 31, 2013 at 3:38 AM UTC
His Grandpa writes poetry in the tub
As our States go into a state of confusion In the passing of their passing of laws Saying now that all their fine citizens Can freely lay out and get ****** As a matter of fact haven't they been doing that For years if my minds working correctly I guess the difference now when they lounge around They can freely puff on it legally So let's all take the bongs out of hiding And add some fresh liquid to it Invite over the neighbors you've never talked to To share in a neighborly spliff It'll certainly make everyone happy When we come together and roll up a fatty Don't worry if to this party your a newbie Here take a hit off this doobie We'll order out pizza And crank up Netflix Watch My Little Pony And laugh and laugh and laugh and laugh and... Wait...now where was I? Oh Yea! So let's take all the bongs out of hiding Hold on...have I already said that? Dude, this is freaking me out!  Lol! Oh okay, here we go... You can now grow your own On your very own farm But instead of deep in the woods It can now be your front yard Of course all the neighbor kids You'll have to watch As they pass by your place And pick from your crops So then you'll have to invest In a scary guard dog To keep them at bay And out of your plot But of course you'll be ****** And forget that he's there Where he'll end up hungry And start eating his share There goes your profit There goes your crop Plus all the time you'll spend behind the dog With a baggy waiting for doggie do do drops But then again the government May not let you grow your own stuff As you wait for the F.D.A. To authorize all your drugs And we all know when you get The government involved Bureaucratic common sense Too often gets lost Maybe this legalization thingy Is not the best of ideas Things seemed to run smoother When we all kept our *** hid
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Mar 21, 2015
Mar 21, 2015 at 8:53 AM UTC
Legalized Marriage! No that's not it...Legalized Marigolds! No...Legalized Rubber Baby Bumper Buggies! Hahahahaha!!! Ahhhh.....That's not it either....Legalized Marijuana! Yea!!!
As our States go into a state of confusion In the passing of their passing of laws Saying now that all their fine citizens Can freely lay out and get ****** As a matter of fact haven't they been doing that For years if my minds working correctly I guess the difference now when they lounge around They can freely puff on it legally So let's all take the bongs out of hiding And add some fresh liquid to it Invite over the neighbors you've never talked to To share in a neighborly spliff It'll certainly make everyone happy When we come together and roll up a fatty Don't worry if to this party your a newbie Here take a hit off this doobie We'll order out pizza And crank up Netflix Watch My Little Pony And laugh and laugh and laugh and laugh and... Wait...now where was I? Oh Yea! So let's take all the bongs out of hiding Hold on...have I already said that? Dude, this is freaking me out!  Lol! Oh okay, here we go... You can now grow your own On your very own farm But instead of deep in the woods It can now be your front yard Of course all the neighbor kids You'll have to watch As they pass by your place And pick from your crops So then you'll have to invest In a scary guard dog To keep them at bay And out of your plot But of course you'll be ****** And forget that he's there Where he'll end up hungry And start eating his share There goes your profit There goes your crop Plus all the time you'll spend behind the dog With a baggy waiting for doggie do do drops But then again the government May not let you grow your own stuff As you wait for the F.D.A. To authorize all your drugs And we all know when you get The government involved Bureaucratic common sense Too often gets lost Maybe this legalization thingy Is not the best of ideas Things seemed to run smoother When we all kept our *** hid
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*Newbie to this lathe Don't wince at expositions See lame gits as dust*
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Oct 11, 2015
Oct 11, 2015 at 11:16 PM UTC
Wood Chips
*the elbow comes to rest in the soft skin coverage of my essence in the dark, it's easy and free to weep but still never cheap everyday is still a word, an everyday struggle word, echoing like a scream in a cavernous void her elbow comes to be buried in my chest, preference for an unavailable, sleeping soft cheek, this elbow sharpened from years of work, worry & baby carrying on this day, of pointing, take-a-hint-to-be-remembering, the simple honors life bestows comes like a pointy elbow poke, across vastness of a bed of whiteout cotton, freshly filling up as I am writing, with thankful years and thankful tears, already recording newbie memories freshly forming up welcome this sharp goodness all the days of our lives, even those everydays of our lives nothing greater than being grateful, and the re-gifting to others the blessings of plentifull* 5:26am Thanksgiving Day 2016
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Nov 24, 2016
Nov 24, 2016 at 5:40 AM UTC
A Thanksgiving Poke
It’s Friday night and a group of us, the ‘university summer fellows’ (Quinn, Jammie, Monique, Lisa and I) are going groovin’. Quinn, a Harvard man (we’ve shed our jaundiced opinions of him), assured us he knows the Boston bar scene. We’re going to test that. We told him we wanted to sway to whimsical beats and chase vivid, neon lights across dance floors, like a bunch of cats - till the hours get wee. His plan is for us to pop-in the “touristy” places, like ‘the Havana Club’, ‘the Manray club’, ‘Garage Boston’ and ‘The Grand’, we’re so 111. As usual, Charles is our party mom, escort and driver. When Peter and I were in Saint-Tropez, earlier this summer, there were beach clothes - dresses, skirts and men's shirts - where they’d woven micro-LEDs into the flowered, dry-wick, fabrics. I think the effect is amazing, friday, and joyous. I got two skirts for everyone (all of my roommates). Tonight Lisa and I are wearing a couple of them. Funny. I’ve mentioned it before, but Lisa‘s an audrey. Her school friends and roommates are all used to it, we’ve been exposed, we have built up immunity. But Quinn’s a newbie, when Lisa came into the living room, LED glittered and lookin-right, he was literally stunned. He froze, for a microsecond, his face went blank and his fingers wiggled, as if disconnected from his overloaded central nervous system. *** Jammie said, having just turned around, “holla at ya brooke!,” he declared, shaking his head in admiration. “Umm mmm,” he added. “I’m sure.” Lisa said, starting to transfer things from her everyday bag to her glittery clutch, the girl cannot accept a compliment. Quinn, coming out of it, cleared his throat. We’re ready. Let Friday night begin!
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Jun 30, 2023
Jun 30, 2023 at 12:12 PM UTC
friday night lites
It’s Friday night and a group of us, the ‘university summer fellows’ (Quinn, Jammie, Monique, Lisa and I) are going groovin’. Quinn, a Harvard man (we’ve shed our jaundiced opinions of him), assured us he knows the Boston bar scene. We’re going to test that. We told him we wanted to sway to whimsical beats and chase vivid, neon lights across dance floors, like a bunch of cats - till the hours get wee. His plan is for us to pop-in the “touristy” places, like ‘the Havana Club’, ‘the Manray club’, ‘Garage Boston’ and ‘The Grand’, we’re so 111. As usual, Charles is our party mom, escort and driver. When Peter and I were in Saint-Tropez, earlier this summer, there were beach clothes - dresses, skirts and men's shirts - where they’d woven micro-LEDs into the flowered, dry-wick, fabrics. I think the effect is amazing, friday, and joyous. I got two skirts for everyone (all of my roommates). Tonight Lisa and I are wearing a couple of them. Funny. I’ve mentioned it before, but Lisa‘s an audrey. Her school friends and roommates are all used to it, we’ve been exposed, we have built up immunity. But Quinn’s a newbie, when Lisa came into the living room, LED glittered and lookin-right, he was literally stunned. He froze, for a microsecond, his face went blank and his fingers wiggled, as if disconnected from his overloaded central nervous system. *** Jammie said, having just turned around, “holla at ya brooke!,” he declared, shaking his head in admiration. “Umm mmm,” he added. “I’m sure.” Lisa said, starting to transfer things from her everyday bag to her glittery clutch, the girl cannot accept a compliment. Quinn, coming out of it, cleared his throat. We’re ready. Let Friday night begin!
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I wish to be free to thinkWithout limitsBirthed again without sin in the unique place I rest my headOnly with no thoughts but my own wild dreamsTo be released into this world as a dreamer and ******* of branchesAs a newbie donning the cape of ignorance and embracing the sword of naivetyA knight or chivalry not know to this generationA pallium to imagine to wildest and purestAn arrow to the sky propelled by desire to fly
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Feb 21, 2010
Feb 21, 2010 at 9:56 AM UTC
Untethering at the seam
Im a newbie with everything. I cant play instruments or video games i dont sing or play sports. i can barely cook. And here you are, having tried and excelled at almost all of it. you, my love, are amazing. and here i am. a newbie at even high school. what caught your eye? what made you love this girl who does nothing but laugh at everything? What makes you love me?
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Apr 14, 2015
Apr 14, 2015 at 6:05 AM UTC
Newbie
Foolscap now I understand better, the ironic humor of naming the plain white paper before me, where the construction commences, the scratched surfaces, entrance ways into the best I can hope to offer and having yet to write                           foolscap laugh out loud, move over great ones, this fool had tipped his cap, betrayed his intention and attention, he has a kitbag of raggedy jumbled words as yet unassembled, and had all life to snap them colored Lego pieces of his own design together in a way that takes the un from unremarkable and so let this newbie commencement be a beginning, not an ending célèbre but a transition to translating the heart and head and a storied vision retained therein, treasure chested into an assemblage pleasing to those who peek over the foolscap's shoulder the snow has dappled doused my lower legs, wet, does not creation commence in the wetness, even slush that is the residue of the brilliance of snow as a concept, even the slush, disdained and discarded, ***** grayed, from it will come my firsts, my births, my ***** grayed, my beloved unbeloved, sculpture of words that resound across the better days to yet, yet yet yet yet - a hundred Yeats yets, sweet vets, all I need is the first word, so chosen, so apropos, foolscap Foolscap - a type of inexpensive writing paper Dedicated to those measured few here who have nurtured me with gentle pushes and sweet perfumed praise to push myself harder yet, push harder than I ever dared. You know who you are. Pray I please you. http://hellopoetry.com/poem/596769/poet-in-trouble/
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Feb 14, 2014
Feb 14, 2014 at 10:57 PM UTC
Foolscap
Foolscap now I understand better, the ironic humor of naming the plain white paper before me, where the construction commences, the scratched surfaces, entrance ways into the best I can hope to offer and having yet to write                           foolscap laugh out loud, move over great ones, this fool had tipped his cap, betrayed his intention and attention, he has a kitbag of raggedy jumbled words as yet unassembled, and had all life to snap them colored Lego pieces of his own design together in a way that takes the un from unremarkable and so let this newbie commencement be a beginning, not an ending célèbre but a transition to translating the heart and head and a storied vision retained therein, treasure chested into an assemblage pleasing to those who peek over the foolscap's shoulder the snow has dappled doused my lower legs, wet, does not creation commence in the wetness, even slush that is the residue of the brilliance of snow as a concept, even the slush, disdained and discarded, ***** grayed, from it will come my firsts, my births, my ***** grayed, my beloved unbeloved, sculpture of words that resound across the better days to yet, yet yet yet yet - a hundred Yeats yets, sweet vets, all I need is the first word, so chosen, so apropos, foolscap Foolscap - a type of inexpensive writing paper Dedicated to those measured few here who have nurtured me with gentle pushes and sweet perfumed praise to push myself harder yet, push harder than I ever dared. You know who you are. Pray I please you. http://hellopoetry.com/poem/596769/poet-in-trouble/
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She wasn't just a "visitor"  she'd been here a while She sat in her corner chair, word search in hand She always had a blanket around her shoulders A big bag filled with snacks open at her side Some times she'd have company Out-of-town family maybe or perhaps a friend They'd sit and chat, drink coffee from a paper cup But mostly, she sat alone She'd always leave her corner neat and clean During visiting hours a "newbie" would never know That corner chair was taken....that was her chair After visiting hours she'd stretch out and re-claim her area We knew though, we'd never take her spot We some times met at the coffee *** "How's your husband?"  "The same...How's your dad?"  "The same" "Keep praying."  "I will....you too."   Then one morning I watched as she packed her things away With tears in her eyes, she looked at me then slowly shook her head As she walked passed me, we clasped hands for a moment "Keep praying" she whispered, then she walked away Perhaps it was just a coincidence....but No one sat in her corner chair all day She was only one person and yet... The ICU waiting room felt empty without her The lady in the corner chair
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Mar 18, 2018
Mar 18, 2018 at 2:43 AM UTC
The Lady in the Corner Chair (stories of the ICU waiting room pt 2)
dew drops in the spring   the sun is shining I'm running towards my mom even though the time has come for me to say goodbye for graduation I try to focus on the day that is graduation But everything is a blur I zone out until my name is called I walk across the field feeling proud, accomplished But I can't help but cry as I try and not trip on my small gown I spot you in the crowd All I can think of at that moment is the memories that we've created and the way we're all huddled up I cry one because I'm leaving the group behind making my way in this word adulting still a newbie at heart learning through trial and error But know this no matter where I go in life I'll always treasure you and the memories that we made my senior year
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Mar 1, 2018
Mar 1, 2018 at 8:12 PM UTC
Graduation
A newbie down here does not know where to go Kept on doing crazy poems for daisies out there. She knows that the line she made were true True as the sun strikes her dry skin Asks for a little guide from the older roses Hey! Please help me and drag me from this grave.
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Dec 26, 2014
Dec 26, 2014 at 10:41 PM UTC
Newbie's poem for you
" Funny how somethings however different we are happens with each one of us, all the time... Like, How we can be happy and sad together at one time... Like, How we all anxiously wait, Staring at the notification button to show a new like, a new follower, a new comment Like, How we judge as poets, that, 'Oh, This guy is a newbie, 'Spare me the broken hearts, 'No, this poem isn't my type', And the worst - *Are you kidding me, this poem is so plain!! No rhymes no metaphors, did I waste my time reading this? What a pain!!* Funny, How we forget as poets, That the sole reason we became poets, was because of this itch in our hands... that arose from our experience, our past, our conscience That tempted us to explore our demons Funny, How we forget as poets, that even if someone doesn't have a writing charm, the whole reason they write anyway, Is to keep themselves sane The romantics, the broken-hearts, the amateurs, the no class Don't worry I shall welcome your poem, Because I am a poet, a poet like you A poet writing to feed his demon A poet writing to keep sane "
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Jul 27, 2015
Jul 27, 2015 at 2:02 PM UTC
Funny