"disproval" poems - Hello Poetry

Sweaty palms Long distance calls Looming nervous presence Bouncing mania Preemptive dreams Persuasion Inadequacy Salty tounges Squealing Subtle disproval Financial discorse Flamboyant pandering Off-balance pulls Compromised callings Charismatic turmoil

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Jun 7, 2019

Jun 7, 2019 at 11:58 PM UTC

chaya136

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Sweaty palms Long distance calls Looming nervous presence Bouncing mania Preemptive dreams Persuasion Inadequacy Salty tounges Squealing Subtle disproval Financial discorse Flamboyant pandering Off-balance pulls Compromised callings Charismatic turmoil

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Pluto floated somberly in his orbit that was askew, Pondering the privilege that had been taken from his view. He once was a part of the cool kids club. Now just a floating rock. Pluto remembered it vividly, The moment a human discovered him initially. Oh, how it filled him with such glee, If only temporarily. Jupiter was the biggest bully, Chastised Pluto for his size, Not that he could help it at all. It gave the planets a point to talk. Saturn and Neptune rolled their eyes. Who was this ‘moon’ trying to join in on their fun? Mercury screamed its disproval, As it was blinded by the Sun. Mars and Venus were indifferent, And Uranus was Pluto’s one defendant. Finally, the humans on Earth gave their verdict. Pluto didn’t meet the criteria to be a planet. He was immediately shunned, His dwarf planet status had begun. Not even the light from the Sun, Cared to reach him at the edge of the solar system. Pluto started to cry, When Eris and Haumea floated by. They lifted Pluto’s eyes. Perhaps being chastised, Was a blessing in disguise.

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Aug 10, 2025

Aug 10, 2025 at 5:08 PM UTC

ReeceAE

Poor Pluto

Pluto floated somberly in his orbit that was askew, Pondering the privilege that had been taken from his view. He once was a part of the cool kids club. Now just a floating rock. Pluto remembered it vividly, The moment a human discovered him initially. Oh, how it filled him with such glee, If only temporarily. Jupiter was the biggest bully, Chastised Pluto for his size, Not that he could help it at all. It gave the planets a point to talk. Saturn and Neptune rolled their eyes. Who was this ‘moon’ trying to join in on their fun? Mercury screamed its disproval, As it was blinded by the Sun. Mars and Venus were indifferent, And Uranus was Pluto’s one defendant. Finally, the humans on Earth gave their verdict. Pluto didn’t meet the criteria to be a planet. He was immediately shunned, His dwarf planet status had begun. Not even the light from the Sun, Cared to reach him at the edge of the solar system. Pluto started to cry, When Eris and Haumea floated by. They lifted Pluto’s eyes. Perhaps being chastised, Was a blessing in disguise.

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Am I what they say I am? Am I what they think I am? Am I what there looks of disproval appear to hold? Why must they look at me like I'm not good enough? Why must they treat me in the same manner? My energy drains... Is their disproval all in my head? Maybe... Maybe.... But until I know for sure.... I guess all I do be... I guess all I can do... Is be good enough for me.

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May 8, 2014

May 8, 2014 at 5:08 PM UTC

coraz6

good?

Am I what they say I am? Am I what they think I am? Am I what there looks of disproval appear to hold? Why must they look at me like I'm not good enough? Why must they treat me in the same manner? My energy drains... Is their disproval all in my head? Maybe... Maybe.... But until I know for sure.... I guess all I do be... I guess all I can do... Is be good enough for me.

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