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#*Can it love you like God loves you, with a love that is better than life? Can it connect you to eternal beauty? Can it save you? Can it redeem you?  Can it lift you out of the miry pit? Can it make you clean enough to finally feel acceptable? Can it delight your soul to the core? Can it take your breath away with its faithfulness to you? Can it paint both sunrise and sunset across the sky to beckon your attention? Can it cause the breeze to blow and gently caress your cheeks? Can it send hummingbirds and wildflowers across your path to romance your heart? Can it parade before you the starry host and call them each by name? Can it probe you to the depths and fill you with itself? Can it rush to your aid riding on the wings of the wind? Can it satisfy your hunger and thirst with bountiful things? Can it give to you feet like a deer that you might dance upon the heights? Can it arrange every detail of your life to draw you and drive you to itself? Can it pursue you with all the resources of the universe? Can it know you through and through and still desire you? Can it raise you up and seat you in the heavenly realms and bless you with every spiritual blessing? Can it supply your every need out of its glorious riches? Can its grace be sufficient for you and its mercy help you in your greatest temptation? Can it pour overflowing comfort into you through all of your troubles? Can it reach down to draw you out of deep waters? Can it set you on an unshakable foundation? Can it bound across the mountains to come to your rescue? Can it make you lie down in green pastures and lead you beside still waters? Can it walk with you through the darkest wilderness and never leave you or forsake you? Can it carry you when you are weak or have fallen? Can it let you rest between its shoulders when you are weary or burdened? Can it escort you to heaven’s banqueting table and spread its banner of love over you? Can it hide you in the shelter of its wing? Can it be your daily portion and immerse you in the boundlessness of itself? Can it clothe you in robes of righteousness and garments of salvation?  Can it give to you praise in exchange for mourning? Can it bestow on you a crown of beauty for ashes? Can it turn your wailing into dancing? Can it flood you with peace like a river? Can it fill your heart with joy in the worst of afflictions? Can it know the way to lead you home? Can it refine you in its fire and bring you forth as gold?  Can it capture you fully even as it sets you fully free? Can it ever truly be your Everything?*#
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Jul 3, 2016
Jul 3, 2016 at 12:47 PM UTC
What Can Your Idol Do?
#*Can it love you like God loves you, with a love that is better than life? Can it connect you to eternal beauty? Can it save you? Can it redeem you?  Can it lift you out of the miry pit? Can it make you clean enough to finally feel acceptable? Can it delight your soul to the core? Can it take your breath away with its faithfulness to you? Can it paint both sunrise and sunset across the sky to beckon your attention? Can it cause the breeze to blow and gently caress your cheeks? Can it send hummingbirds and wildflowers across your path to romance your heart? Can it parade before you the starry host and call them each by name? Can it probe you to the depths and fill you with itself? Can it rush to your aid riding on the wings of the wind? Can it satisfy your hunger and thirst with bountiful things? Can it give to you feet like a deer that you might dance upon the heights? Can it arrange every detail of your life to draw you and drive you to itself? Can it pursue you with all the resources of the universe? Can it know you through and through and still desire you? Can it raise you up and seat you in the heavenly realms and bless you with every spiritual blessing? Can it supply your every need out of its glorious riches? Can its grace be sufficient for you and its mercy help you in your greatest temptation? Can it pour overflowing comfort into you through all of your troubles? Can it reach down to draw you out of deep waters? Can it set you on an unshakable foundation? Can it bound across the mountains to come to your rescue? Can it make you lie down in green pastures and lead you beside still waters? Can it walk with you through the darkest wilderness and never leave you or forsake you? Can it carry you when you are weak or have fallen? Can it let you rest between its shoulders when you are weary or burdened? Can it escort you to heaven’s banqueting table and spread its banner of love over you? Can it hide you in the shelter of its wing? Can it be your daily portion and immerse you in the boundlessness of itself? Can it clothe you in robes of righteousness and garments of salvation?  Can it give to you praise in exchange for mourning? Can it bestow on you a crown of beauty for ashes? Can it turn your wailing into dancing? Can it flood you with peace like a river? Can it fill your heart with joy in the worst of afflictions? Can it know the way to lead you home? Can it refine you in its fire and bring you forth as gold?  Can it capture you fully even as it sets you fully free? Can it ever truly be your Everything?*#
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Mountains on mountains erupt from the earth's chambers of burdened lava and collapse back into their hellish landscape just as quickly Waves assault the beach in frenzied randomness, striking their mark upon the sand and washing it away in the same breath Birds flail about, learning to sail the clouds while dolphins soar their vast expanse of golden sea People in suits war with each other for ****** glory, sign a strip of paper agreeing to stop, then ignorantly carry on their violent pastiche Far away, tucked behind his world of scattered phrases and pretentious works of art, the writer observes all this P R O C R A S T I N A T I N G
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Apr 21, 2018
Apr 21, 2018 at 5:22 AM UTC
The Art of Procrastination
Rich People are pouring  brandy in their glasses as the winter freezes the ones from the lower classes The lazy riches who do nothing are eating a lot and the hardworking labourers are left to rot The Greedy Sons of Man fight and die for money collecting even a coin,like bees collect nectar for honey Rich People are commiting crimes and moving free as the poor are treated like dogs of low degree Swanking their richness is their biggest pleasure and the miseries of the poor are out any measure The Money Hungry just want more of it all around just like mud laden pigs roll in muddy ground Rich People believe they are not bound to any rule and the low classes are the ones who get fooled Even the government listens to the Riches the most and the others are burdened with rising costs The Lettuce Frenzied are hoarding money in bank just like dogs bury the bones in the lands Rich People believe that they are of a superior race and the low classes are the ones thrown into disgrace Exploiting the poor is Rich People's favourite habit and the others just watch,waiting for the same of it The Money loving people can make the system bend and why does this vicious beast of humanity has NO END ?
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Jan 30, 2011
Jan 30, 2011 at 4:25 AM UTC
Rich People
What a city I murmur to myself looking at its map. We approached the city known as Dis, with its vast army and its burdened citizens. At last we reached the moats dug deep around the dismal city. What destroys the poetry of a city? Automobiles destroy it, and they destroy more than the poetry. Dante and Virgil chased by 7 or 8 dangerous devils Grumpy, Happy, Sneezy, Sleepy, ***** . . . Our heroes reduced from metaphysical philosophers interested in god and what man has done to man to improvising primitive tools for survival. Hope abandoned, we rate our chances of expiring in the nuclear fire – excellent – during the decline of western civilization. On the other hand, I hope our current problems are only temporary and it’s just a matter of time before the public ignores the 24-hour news cycle. Bad news sells but the good life’s all around us. One feels love and devotion even for the 60 million who voted for our opponent. Vaclav Havel said with a wisdom well beyond brilliance: “Either we have hope within us or we don’t. It is a dimension of the soul, and it’s not dependent on some particular observation of the world or estimate of the situation. It is an orientation of the spirit, an orientation of the heart that transcends the world as it’s immediately experienced. It is not the conviction that something will turn out well, but the certainty that something makes sense no matter how it turns out.” It resembles grief. But it's not quite grief. I'll give you grief. Certain days planned to be eventful I look forward to for weeks. Let the peaceful transfer of power proceed. The sorrow and the pity. Never may the anarchic man find rest at my hearth. When the laws are kept, how proudly the city stands! When the laws are broken, what of the city then? We are moving through some allegory between a City of Hope, where history has been abolished, and a City of History, where hope can be slipped in only as contraband. Failing to achieve understanding, we're searching outer space for an entity to unite us as humanity. That person, or city, is consciousness. Two ancient female poets are a revelation, the clarity of their complaints: lost lover, lost city. Our enemy eventually becomes our brother, his misery lifted by coming to her city.
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Apr 1, 2018
Apr 1, 2018 at 9:23 AM UTC
City of Hope
What a city I murmur to myself looking at its map. We approached the city known as Dis, with its vast army and its burdened citizens. At last we reached the moats dug deep around the dismal city. What destroys the poetry of a city? Automobiles destroy it, and they destroy more than the poetry. Dante and Virgil chased by 7 or 8 dangerous devils Grumpy, Happy, Sneezy, Sleepy, ***** . . . Our heroes reduced from metaphysical philosophers interested in god and what man has done to man to improvising primitive tools for survival. Hope abandoned, we rate our chances of expiring in the nuclear fire – excellent – during the decline of western civilization. On the other hand, I hope our current problems are only temporary and it’s just a matter of time before the public ignores the 24-hour news cycle. Bad news sells but the good life’s all around us. One feels love and devotion even for the 60 million who voted for our opponent. Vaclav Havel said with a wisdom well beyond brilliance: “Either we have hope within us or we don’t. It is a dimension of the soul, and it’s not dependent on some particular observation of the world or estimate of the situation. It is an orientation of the spirit, an orientation of the heart that transcends the world as it’s immediately experienced. It is not the conviction that something will turn out well, but the certainty that something makes sense no matter how it turns out.” It resembles grief. But it's not quite grief. I'll give you grief. Certain days planned to be eventful I look forward to for weeks. Let the peaceful transfer of power proceed. The sorrow and the pity. Never may the anarchic man find rest at my hearth. When the laws are kept, how proudly the city stands! When the laws are broken, what of the city then? We are moving through some allegory between a City of Hope, where history has been abolished, and a City of History, where hope can be slipped in only as contraband. Failing to achieve understanding, we're searching outer space for an entity to unite us as humanity. That person, or city, is consciousness. Two ancient female poets are a revelation, the clarity of their complaints: lost lover, lost city. Our enemy eventually becomes our brother, his misery lifted by coming to her city.
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Do you want a slice of cake, might keep you going just for now. But as you are not used to eating, you have the hooves we'll keep the cow. The modern world is dying younger, unlike those in the poorer east. Who die through lack of food and water, we're dying because we're obese. In this modern city arena, it seems our portion is the more free health and overwhelming safety but we save that small slice for the poor. The waste is massive, over burdened, tons of food are chucked away. As we stick to our sell by clearance just think for what so many pray. Do we need such a massive slice, even half would fill our needs. The west gets fat the east is wanting scrubbing around for scraps and seeds. So next time when feasting in McDonalds, and washing down with large milkshake. Try and see your own reflexion and you'll see whom eats all the cake. Before you leave that busy food-hall, just have a quick look in the bin and you will see the unholy waste, perhaps you'll also see the sin. The slicing of this planets cake   seems to be divided wrong. So cut it into a fairer slices and send it to where it belongs.
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Nov 13, 2014
Nov 13, 2014 at 2:54 PM UTC
Slice that Cake
As the violet of day draws to a close...           Witnessed the dwindling vermillion sun,              being swallowed   by the horizon. Ever so slowly,        seconds stretched...       This moment here... Captured...       and                 froze.             Brushing off the indigos     and                 blues.           of the past,             Whilst I shed these scarlet tears. Burdened with               unfounded speculation and fears.         Gifted the         lease of bravery but I know...         it wouldn't last.       A final skirmish             between                           night and light.             My crimson wings     spread to greet the.         green evening air.             Feather and wind.             spoke to each other;       quivered as if               the same story         they shared.           A conversation                   that ended quickly before both took               flight.                         To the                         highest heavens, leaving a           trail of leaves from days of yellow...           Flying past the                  blushing orange cheeks   of                         sleeping clouds.              Evading the beckoning of                           night's curtains and             shrouds.       Into the sun, I would go.                 Beyond world's end,            I would follow... To find you                   where the universe                       would run its course.                       I'd gladly soar through        spectrum's grain, Through               unfamiliar realms and                                 warped new planes. Why?           Because       blood red   rubies           pump             through mine and                 garnets           flow                     through yours...
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Apr 30, 2015
Apr 30, 2015 at 2:38 PM UTC
Spectrum Red
As the violet of day draws to a close...           Witnessed the dwindling vermillion sun,              being swallowed   by the horizon. Ever so slowly,        seconds stretched...       This moment here... Captured...       and                 froze.             Brushing off the indigos     and                 blues.           of the past,             Whilst I shed these scarlet tears. Burdened with               unfounded speculation and fears.         Gifted the         lease of bravery but I know...         it wouldn't last.       A final skirmish             between                           night and light.             My crimson wings     spread to greet the.         green evening air.             Feather and wind.             spoke to each other;       quivered as if               the same story         they shared.           A conversation                   that ended quickly before both took               flight.                         To the                         highest heavens, leaving a           trail of leaves from days of yellow...           Flying past the                  blushing orange cheeks   of                         sleeping clouds.              Evading the beckoning of                           night's curtains and             shrouds.       Into the sun, I would go.                 Beyond world's end,            I would follow... To find you                   where the universe                       would run its course.                       I'd gladly soar through        spectrum's grain, Through               unfamiliar realms and                                 warped new planes. Why?           Because       blood red   rubies           pump             through mine and                 garnets           flow                     through yours...
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What reason do we have to be angry. What reason do we have to curse the stars and all the threads that bind them. Who's fault apart from ours is it, that this is the hell that we have placed ourselves amidst. Every point in our lives, lying like a checkpoint, glowing like a streetlamp in the dead of night. At the feet of these golden warm, welcoming lights there lay a crossroad. And we foolish children feeble in heart and mind fumble without a further thought. We follow our hearts and we follow them into deep into the disguising dark. - Adventure was the death of us, antagonizing. Adventure was heartache, agony as evil wizards warped our worlds until we were weaning. It wasn't too late before the brazen beasts had burdened our lives with ever more brutality. Wolves hungry for the hearts of men, walking on hind legs to better hinder us with horrors. This world is beautiful with wonder, but it's wonders are like lights upon the Lophiiformes head. Bright, beautiful and inviting But lead with haste into the jaws of oblivion, well hidden amongst the dark. N.H.
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Nov 23, 2013
Nov 23, 2013 at 10:15 AM UTC
Adventure
I asked you If you thought You were capable of hurting me You said you weighed 115lb But a sliver of glass Cannot weigh more than a few grams Look what that can do You are a shattered pane That is all I feel Your little slivers under my skin You are not my mother But I hear her in your voice You have a mother's touch It stings all to familiar You broke the skin on my face Open like a ripe peach I suppose we are all capable of terrible things But you burdened yours as love Pressed it into my skin And let me rot in silence
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Apr 24, 2022
Apr 24, 2022 at 10:25 AM UTC
unHEARD
Madness stricken they left me here to rot in my own sanity a lost soul burdened to dwell within the halls of my broken mind this is my cross to bare and none shall ever know on the outside I'm just myself but inside I died long ago.
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Jun 9, 2014
Jun 9, 2014 at 8:34 AM UTC
The struggle
He's her sickness, with him she's unwell She's his drug, without her life's hell He's her nightmare, with him she's frightened She's his sweetest dreams, without her he's burdened He's her despair, with him she's grieved She's his hope, with her he's fulfilled He's her failure She's his success
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Jun 25, 2014
Jun 25, 2014 at 5:24 PM UTC
Complicated
Recovery is a long and painful process. Its a lengthy, twisting, one way road. It is not fair, life never is. You need to accept that that is just the way it goes. Broken hearts, they will never shatter even. We were so close until the day she said she was leaving. It was so easy for her to let us go. She left me here alone and why I still don't know. She thought I would be broken, as soon as she was gone. Now it's time for me to prove that she had thought wrong. Yes I cared about her; she had said she cared about me. Those were empty words, burdened with all the lies that I now see. It was far too perfect that I should have known it could never be true. It hurts even after so much time; my recovery is beyond overdue. I was blindsided; she always knew exactly the right words to say. She made my heart race and I had never considered the chance that she would just walk away. I wish I had known what she had planned to do. Because she only proved why trusting people is not what I should do. Now there are no more lies and I’m no longer waiting. No more time of mine is she taking. I am so done; I wasted so much of my time. All on a girl who couldn’t even consider mine. My heart still stands, as if it was never broken. It is as strong as her lies, so easily spoken. But the time I had with her I will never regret. She taught me a few lessons that I will not soon forget. The first thing I learned is to not trust someone with your heart, Because in the end, it will likely end up ripped apart. Then there’s lesson two, and this comes from a different part; Do not be with someone if you already know you’re going to break their heart. I’m done lying to myself and not completely accepting me. It only took a broken heart and then the recovery.
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Oct 25, 2012
Oct 25, 2012 at 9:52 AM UTC
Recovery
Recovery is a long and painful process. Its a lengthy, twisting, one way road. It is not fair, life never is. You need to accept that that is just the way it goes. Broken hearts, they will never shatter even. We were so close until the day she said she was leaving. It was so easy for her to let us go. She left me here alone and why I still don't know. She thought I would be broken, as soon as she was gone. Now it's time for me to prove that she had thought wrong. Yes I cared about her; she had said she cared about me. Those were empty words, burdened with all the lies that I now see. It was far too perfect that I should have known it could never be true. It hurts even after so much time; my recovery is beyond overdue. I was blindsided; she always knew exactly the right words to say. She made my heart race and I had never considered the chance that she would just walk away. I wish I had known what she had planned to do. Because she only proved why trusting people is not what I should do. Now there are no more lies and I’m no longer waiting. No more time of mine is she taking. I am so done; I wasted so much of my time. All on a girl who couldn’t even consider mine. My heart still stands, as if it was never broken. It is as strong as her lies, so easily spoken. But the time I had with her I will never regret. She taught me a few lessons that I will not soon forget. The first thing I learned is to not trust someone with your heart, Because in the end, it will likely end up ripped apart. Then there’s lesson two, and this comes from a different part; Do not be with someone if you already know you’re going to break their heart. I’m done lying to myself and not completely accepting me. It only took a broken heart and then the recovery.
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Shadows. They are everywhere. In the corners, behind things, in front of things but the one that scares me the most is the one behind ME. He follows me where ever I go, dragging my past and secrets with him. I wish he would go away but then again, I don't. Because then I would be all alone. Only to watch the other shadows and think, "How many secrets is that one burdened with?" My shadow has my past in a death grip and he won't let go of it. He holds on so tightly that I can't breathe. Strangling me so slowly that no one, not even their shadows, can see what is happening before it becomes to late and I am gone; along with my shadow, so he never has to drag around my past and secrets again. He will finally be free of me.
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Mar 24, 2014
Mar 24, 2014 at 1:38 AM UTC
Shadows
The voices in my head, brought me to this place A gloomy surrounding, everything looking lifeless and sad I question myself, “Why am I here?” But as I look ahead, I see a beautiful mountain; covered in fluffy snow, Almost looking like the clouds. Now, I am yearning to see the mountain up close, But how do I get to see the best view? With no one around, not even animals Who do I go for, for advice? I continue to look and walk around, Still clueless, not sure what has drawn me to go on this journey “It’s only a mountain,” I tell myself. Trying to figure out where the voices in my head came from My mind is blocked Can’t think straight or See clearly Everything is a blur. Could this possibly be a dream? I continue on with this journey Trying my best to find a way to get to the snowy mountains Tired and lifeless, I pass out in the middle of nowhere Flashbacks start to come You were the voice in my head Your harsh words, Harsh words that brought me into this dark place Left me feeling helpless and burdened I get up and try to find a way out Here I am standing, standing where I began Looking at the mountain, From where I’m standing, I question myself: “Which way do I go?” There’s the stream A stream that’s aligned with the mountain And the mountains with a path cleared out Directing me to the snowy mountain. The voices in my head Preventing me from moving forward, Drowning me with sadness. The longer I’m here, The more it overwhelms me I’ve got to get out of here.
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Jul 7, 2018
Jul 7, 2018 at 9:56 PM UTC
voices in my head
The voices in my head, brought me to this place A gloomy surrounding, everything looking lifeless and sad I question myself, “Why am I here?” But as I look ahead, I see a beautiful mountain; covered in fluffy snow, Almost looking like the clouds. Now, I am yearning to see the mountain up close, But how do I get to see the best view? With no one around, not even animals Who do I go for, for advice? I continue to look and walk around, Still clueless, not sure what has drawn me to go on this journey “It’s only a mountain,” I tell myself. Trying to figure out where the voices in my head came from My mind is blocked Can’t think straight or See clearly Everything is a blur. Could this possibly be a dream? I continue on with this journey Trying my best to find a way to get to the snowy mountains Tired and lifeless, I pass out in the middle of nowhere Flashbacks start to come You were the voice in my head Your harsh words, Harsh words that brought me into this dark place Left me feeling helpless and burdened I get up and try to find a way out Here I am standing, standing where I began Looking at the mountain, From where I’m standing, I question myself: “Which way do I go?” There’s the stream A stream that’s aligned with the mountain And the mountains with a path cleared out Directing me to the snowy mountain. The voices in my head Preventing me from moving forward, Drowning me with sadness. The longer I’m here, The more it overwhelms me I’ve got to get out of here.
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When letters wait to pounce on a blank page when thoughts crowd the mind like frothing **** in a pond I keep wondering what poetry is to me what poetry is to many Is it not the language of the heart with no intervention of gray matter the unlocking of closed vaults stirring the embers of love, hurt or pain or giving a free rein to fancy and flying on magic carpets to lands forlorn Sometimes it is a glide into a sea of tranquillity an escape from the humdrum of the world a flash of liberation from assaults of pain a sedative to numb the turmoil a sanctuary for a burdened heart a window to look at the world through a companion when one is inconsolably alone a candle flame in a darkening world a cloth line to hang the ***** laundry a water lily blooming in the pool of tears a shelter in homelessness sometimes it is a ladder to climb up to Heavens an angel on wings with tidings of hope peace in a world braced for war Poetry, if you are all these let us fall at your feet bless us in our art may we splurge in fancy and conjure up worlds from words! our poems may not be light houses but could be fireflies on a starless night!
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Dec 20, 2017
Dec 20, 2017 at 11:56 AM UTC
What Poetry Is
The madness, the darkness has come seeping in, once again I am burdened with my sin, The thoughts, they swirl in a crazed tempo, beating against my skull with the desperate fury of a dying heart. I am drowning under a tide of pensive dispair, Struggling to even gasp for air, Oh! I lament my own awareness, my jealousy is reserved for the blind. Surely, I must be mad! How could I not be with such anguish I am clad, One true question remains. Will I fade, implode, or explode with such force as to devastate my own? Run! My darkness is no longer a flame lazing, but an inferno blazing, We all have our afflictions, mine is thought.
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Dec 13, 2015
Dec 13, 2015 at 4:19 PM UTC
Thought: My Affliction
When I discern a goal I want to meet, I must fully commit to the process. 3 steps forward, 1 step back. While it may not be perfect, I am moving forward with resolve. A slip is not a fall Unless I put my hands down And a fall is not a failure Unless I accept defeat. Because I was born with the power and strength To stand up against gravity And anything else that tries To bring me to my knees. But it is determination that gives me The courage to keep going When burdened by fear of failure And the unknown. When a tornado picks me up And violently plops me down In the land of insanity, It is determination that returns me home, Even when I thought it impossible Because crazy had become my new norm. And it is my determination to discover My place in this world, my value That keeps me present in my body When all I want to do is run away.
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Jul 17, 2015
Jul 17, 2015 at 10:42 AM UTC
Determination
LIGHTBULB. Lightbulb; the moths flutter and beat themselves to death against an idea. A thought, vivid like glass, bright like tungsten- glows. I am reaching out to my mind again, my wings burned and burdened...Wait. I have lost track of my metaphors again... But then again, like the moths, I have lost track of many things- except for the unknown light in front of me.
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Aug 5, 2014
Aug 5, 2014 at 5:34 PM UTC
Lightbulb.
Thing's that make me uncomfortable: That feeling when you get mad at me, because I didn't do the thing, you didn't ask me to do, cause I can't read minds; I'm not your parent. That tone in your voice when you go off about how unfair the world is, triggered by the slightest setback. The feeling when I sacrifice all that I am for the sake of your mood and happiness, in vain. That sound of the exacerbated sigh when I ask you to run an errand, as if I am not also tired. The pressure of carrying us both on broken legs. The pit in my chest when I ask your opinion and you say "I don't care," but you actually do care, because whatever choice I make is laced in ridicule. When you say you're doing something for me but you're just trying to make yourself feel better about doing it for yourself. When you use my disorder as a justification or excuse, but when I actually need your help you seem burdened and annoyed. That "okay then" moment when I give you everything you ask for and you take it as if you never wanted it.
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Sep 8, 2018
Sep 8, 2018 at 7:10 AM UTC
5:30 a.m.
It's been ten years. Ten years that I've been allowed to exist here. Things here are beautiful magnificent fascinating and extremely exhausting. There is so much to take in. The rivers, crystal clear and endless. The forests, lush and deeply green. People are far and few between and everything is amazing. It's been one hundred years. One hundred years and I still can't get enough. Every night is filled with wonder. Stars cover a velvety black night sky and a softly glowing moon's rays caress the rolling hills and valleys. Every day is full of adventure. I feel like a small child, humbled at the bottom of a waterfall sprayed down by cool mist and I see her on the other side. Grin, raise a hand in greeting, and wait for a response. It's been only another ten years. Now one hundred and ten years that I've been trapped here. She is not like myself. She can die, and unfortunately, I cannot follow. Death would be a blessing. Life is now a curse. Great cities of stone and wood have risen up around me. But I feel hollow empty burdened by the loss of her. It's been one thousand years. One thousand years that I have been exiled here. The cities have grown and become still more populated. Yet I am alone. It is hopeless, pointless; making friends, beginning even the most harmless of relationships holds no appeal for me. They all will die, for they are mortal. And I shall be left, once again, with nothing but memories. Life is now a chore, no longer a gift. It's been ten thousand years. Ten thousand years, and all hope is not lost. Though the world is now entirely too full. and city has turned to metropolis, so great are the numbers among me. But I tell you my tale because you are like me. No longer will my eternity be empty. From master to servant you have turned me. And I do not mind being vulnerable; opening up to you is wonderful. Things here are once more magnificent now that I may see them through your eyes by your side my beautiful immortal.
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Sep 29, 2012
Sep 29, 2012 at 9:53 PM UTC
Ballad of an Immortal
It's been ten years. Ten years that I've been allowed to exist here. Things here are beautiful magnificent fascinating and extremely exhausting. There is so much to take in. The rivers, crystal clear and endless. The forests, lush and deeply green. People are far and few between and everything is amazing. It's been one hundred years. One hundred years and I still can't get enough. Every night is filled with wonder. Stars cover a velvety black night sky and a softly glowing moon's rays caress the rolling hills and valleys. Every day is full of adventure. I feel like a small child, humbled at the bottom of a waterfall sprayed down by cool mist and I see her on the other side. Grin, raise a hand in greeting, and wait for a response. It's been only another ten years. Now one hundred and ten years that I've been trapped here. She is not like myself. She can die, and unfortunately, I cannot follow. Death would be a blessing. Life is now a curse. Great cities of stone and wood have risen up around me. But I feel hollow empty burdened by the loss of her. It's been one thousand years. One thousand years that I have been exiled here. The cities have grown and become still more populated. Yet I am alone. It is hopeless, pointless; making friends, beginning even the most harmless of relationships holds no appeal for me. They all will die, for they are mortal. And I shall be left, once again, with nothing but memories. Life is now a chore, no longer a gift. It's been ten thousand years. Ten thousand years, and all hope is not lost. Though the world is now entirely too full. and city has turned to metropolis, so great are the numbers among me. But I tell you my tale because you are like me. No longer will my eternity be empty. From master to servant you have turned me. And I do not mind being vulnerable; opening up to you is wonderful. Things here are once more magnificent now that I may see them through your eyes by your side my beautiful immortal.
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As I gaze upon the vast expanse of the night sky As I look upon the greatness of the seas As I ponder on the things I cannot know As I dive into the deepest parts of me It is there that I see and I come to believe In the presence of one who at times reminds The heart and soul of peace love truth there are signs I am blind to my mistakes keep playing in my mind There is chaos and sadness but sometimes I find A love quiet and strong sadness and pain but hope in the rain A stronghold a shelter when I am burdened and weak It is here the presence resides that I seek There is a longing an ache a burning I feel So great that I am caused to kneel But it is here somehow that something begins In tears and in pain the great weight of my sins Seems a little lighter and I know that God wins He paid the greatest price on one fateful Friday And He is faithful good and true in my day Sadly it seems sometimes this world is forgetting The kind of example that Jesus was setting To show us the true meaning of life and love What it is to be human and divine A single candle in the dark can brightly shine Illuminate my deepest darkest corners of me Clear away the cobwebs, sweep away the dust Clean this old house of pride, jealousy, and lust Help me once again to see Just how much you must love me
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Sep 13, 2014
Sep 13, 2014 at 11:17 AM UTC
Soul Searching
Prologue casual glance at my notifications while driving even though I’m all ready a bad bad boy, cruising at a sedate, cruise-controlled 70 mph  vs. the bureaucrat bifocals 55, a remnant regulation of the Eighties, all the while humming with Gilligan “a 3 hour tour, 2 passengers set sail that day” then execute a four lane 180, gotta get highway sideway grassed , cause i’m gassed... by a Poem Breach of the poems promised by me, to write of thee, you, my best inspiration, the list grows longer, faster than the hours provided pull over fast emergency for my composure breached, my vision wetted, my eyes hit by an unplanned unexpected, sudden summer thunderstorm <•> The Poem Breach ***once more into the breach thy words breeze through my chest, like on a flamed stick, night roasting, toasting beach summer marshmallows, that cut direct to the ineffable sadness that resides resists within, that sticky, white mess, a human heart melting a thank you message that I’ve read before, many times more than once, how my unasked poem, a sun unique, arrived at the precise time and place, to lift and even save, how could I’ve know? I did not know but these messages collect on my chest, unsought words of purple ribbon metal that make a less burdened cowardly lion, grown man cry, do crazy things for it is a possible solution to his age old quest Why do I exist, is this my purposed plan, don’t understand, all but the answer peaked and peaceful accepted in the breach unreasoned, my port of entry, a gateway to the scales, a bridge it is, over a time-life river styx and unstuck, yet certainly always confused...*** “It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far, far better rest that I go to than I have ever known.” thank you so insufficient
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Jul 21, 2018
Jul 21, 2018 at 11:56 AM UTC
that poem breach
Prologue casual glance at my notifications while driving even though I’m all ready a bad bad boy, cruising at a sedate, cruise-controlled 70 mph  vs. the bureaucrat bifocals 55, a remnant regulation of the Eighties, all the while humming with Gilligan “a 3 hour tour, 2 passengers set sail that day” then execute a four lane 180, gotta get highway sideway grassed , cause i’m gassed... by a Poem Breach of the poems promised by me, to write of thee, you, my best inspiration, the list grows longer, faster than the hours provided pull over fast emergency for my composure breached, my vision wetted, my eyes hit by an unplanned unexpected, sudden summer thunderstorm <•> The Poem Breach ***once more into the breach thy words breeze through my chest, like on a flamed stick, night roasting, toasting beach summer marshmallows, that cut direct to the ineffable sadness that resides resists within, that sticky, white mess, a human heart melting a thank you message that I’ve read before, many times more than once, how my unasked poem, a sun unique, arrived at the precise time and place, to lift and even save, how could I’ve know? I did not know but these messages collect on my chest, unsought words of purple ribbon metal that make a less burdened cowardly lion, grown man cry, do crazy things for it is a possible solution to his age old quest Why do I exist, is this my purposed plan, don’t understand, all but the answer peaked and peaceful accepted in the breach unreasoned, my port of entry, a gateway to the scales, a bridge it is, over a time-life river styx and unstuck, yet certainly always confused...*** “It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far, far better rest that I go to than I have ever known.” thank you so insufficient
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DEAR PENPAL PEOPLE, the difference makes no difference:> under the rain love me above the clouds love me not think the days flowery and notes of C think the blame is on the sugary plot ever since I painted accidents with red violets turned blue swoon my demeanor shaded a women with a stubborn head the kind of color that you moon the most of the most all no sequence separated is what my season is up to raise that toast and them breezes lay chills for the never faded sweet stay on my mind rule my mercury the feel of love is neat the curious incident that manifested this artery a crumble of pieces to get back all a dawn a primary color painted on my nails tickling a green lawn can't be traded with no other odor the sparkles danced roses over my heart I knew the first page would be the death of me from the start wouldn't trade it with any other stage how did we get there? the possession of double happiness the dry blood scattered in the air moments printed in hopeful swift angriness delusional dimensions out of the norm things my soul would grant a suspension this time to welcome the storm I don't think so the blur of the night on a stairs a stumble in once upon ago brought pretty smiles in crying strands of hair because I don't want to wake up the dressing of sunrise capital the unwanted, a guitar playing after my tea cup even if the burdened wrists all heavy calculated radicals kisses infected mere means the days of thoughtful ventures of doubtful summers and no sleep something an old vanilla scent betrays a different texture ­ -------ravenfeels
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Oct 31, 2021
Oct 31, 2021 at 5:26 PM UTC
Violets For Roses
DEAR PENPAL PEOPLE, the difference makes no difference:> under the rain love me above the clouds love me not think the days flowery and notes of C think the blame is on the sugary plot ever since I painted accidents with red violets turned blue swoon my demeanor shaded a women with a stubborn head the kind of color that you moon the most of the most all no sequence separated is what my season is up to raise that toast and them breezes lay chills for the never faded sweet stay on my mind rule my mercury the feel of love is neat the curious incident that manifested this artery a crumble of pieces to get back all a dawn a primary color painted on my nails tickling a green lawn can't be traded with no other odor the sparkles danced roses over my heart I knew the first page would be the death of me from the start wouldn't trade it with any other stage how did we get there? the possession of double happiness the dry blood scattered in the air moments printed in hopeful swift angriness delusional dimensions out of the norm things my soul would grant a suspension this time to welcome the storm I don't think so the blur of the night on a stairs a stumble in once upon ago brought pretty smiles in crying strands of hair because I don't want to wake up the dressing of sunrise capital the unwanted, a guitar playing after my tea cup even if the burdened wrists all heavy calculated radicals kisses infected mere means the days of thoughtful ventures of doubtful summers and no sleep something an old vanilla scent betrays a different texture ­ -------ravenfeels
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Corruption and Seduction, twins living in discordant harmony. Firstly, Corruption lives in a crowded home, in the lamplit living rooms and in the starched collars and sore legged dining halls.         Seduction lives in the attic, and ghosts from room to room, leaning on others as it passes, like an injured soldier.              Guiding into places seldom spoken of and rarely trod. She asked him how he could change his mind so quickly. I think his mind was never made in the first place. Be it Corruption or Seduction, they live as synonyms and antonyms. A promise broken, words thrown aside or forgotten, a trust crumbling to dust. Credit this, not to one or the other, but to both, working for each other to accomplish the objectives laid at their feet by the gods. Moments of weakness, burdened with fear and doubt, belong to this indecent pair.          Scoffed by most, yet intimately known to all, Corruption and Seduction manipulate and corrugate.
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Jun 11, 2018
Jun 11, 2018 at 1:23 PM UTC
Corruption and Seduction
As though their roles are irreversible, As only comforters to bread winners, And thought as weak oft perceived as sinners, The men rules, women seems incapable. Dear fathers why burdened your daughters so? Of women's jobs but forced the girls to fill The pails with water, wood from distant hills, Instead of school to learn what they should know. Herded at tender age to married life; Heaven's rewards engraved on simple minds; To tidy, cook and wash, no cuddly toys, Be ever present, good, obedient wife. They need your love, affections so be kind, They strive in onerous world with men and boys.
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Aug 13, 2018
Aug 13, 2018 at 5:25 AM UTC
Why Burdened Daughters so? Sonnet #12