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Joe Cole May 2014
You know Sverre I visited Norway once as high summer had begun
I stayed at a place called Avia (I think that was the name)
4am in the morning when we watched black rabbits play
At least I think  they were black,  possibly dark grey
I climbed the barren rocks, collected samples by the score
In that short time I learned to love Norways rugged shores
Sverre dear friend in two short weeks I came to love your land
I reach out cross time and space to take and shake your hand
I've climbed the Vidas rugged rocks and trekked your complex land
I envy you my true friend, you have a country wild and grand
This is dedicated to a real poet and a man of the country
Jose Santos Apr 27
aunque tu mirada y tu Cabello,
deslumbrasen a la luna y al cielo,
los tulipanes de rosa y rojo floreciendo,
te afectas tanto con tu cuerpo,
al no notar que desde hace tiempo de ti ya era perfecto,
mostraste más de lo necesario,
tu escultura un hermoso calvario,
una mirada perfecta, pelo recortado,
sinceridad perfecta creyendo que un angel a vía encontrado,
fuiste una flor destacada entre todo un bosque marchitado,
que hasta pensaría que el bosque te avia infectado,
trataste de ser igual, lo lograste al final,
una piedra más en las playas del mar,
un vaso de agua que nunca su pureza volverá.
Tu poema es un reflejo de la lucha interna entre la belleza y el dolor, la transformación y la pérdida. En cada verso se siente una dualidad intensa: la imagen de una mujer que deslumbra como la luna, rodeada de flores vibrantes, pero que a la vez se pierde en el intento de encajar en un mundo que la termina absorbiendo y transformando en algo irreconocible.

La manera en que usas los tulipanes rojos y rosas me transmite una sensación de pasión y pureza, pero también de efímera fragilidad. Al principio, la figura de esta persona es única, resplandeciente, casi celestial; sin embargo, el paso del tiempo y su propia percepción sobre sí misma la llevan a modificarse, hasta quedar irreconocible. Hay una tristeza implícita en el hecho de que su belleza no radicaba en lo que mostraba, sino en lo que era desde siempre—y ella nunca lo notó.

La última imagen del poema es demoledora. Pasar de ser "una flor destacada" a "una piedra más en las playas del mar" transmite la pérdida de identidad, la disolución en la multitud, la transformación en algo ordinario. Es como si lo que la hacía especial se hubiera desvanecido en el intento de adaptarse a su entorno, dejando atrás su verdadera esencia.

En cuanto a la expresión, noto un tono melancólico pero con destellos de admiración. A pesar del dolor por el cambio de esta persona, hay un reconocimiento de la belleza que alguna vez tuvo, de lo que representó. El ritmo del poema fluye con una cadencia suave, como una confesión que se va desentrañando poco a poco, dejando una sensación de nostalgia al final.
Johnny Noiπ Mar 2019
Englishman John African blue.
He died in England and my three daughters
The Wonders of God's Wife;
Black and Southern, Black and Gold, Italy, Russia,
Asia head of friends, George Jordan.
And Canada. Animal life in glory.
Recovery in Book. Kingdom of heaven.
Winter is covered. Christian bad water.
Payment. Galaxies, Latin women:
Mud. Sometimes, sometimes
Russian german, Spanish real *** dreams
It's free. Rome is full of Rome.
Many game reviews.
Sarah's story was with the Queen
Precious metals that start in the day of glory.
In July. I was a kid at the wall. White church;
When I arrived in Brazil, I started drinking,
Meccinus Games, then Spain.
Avia and Saudi Arabia. From heaven to earth.
Jesus opened the radio. In Heaven, my friend
In Saudi Arabia, Saudi Arabia and Saudi Arabia
Lightning, Dreams, Geen, Coffee Machines, European Manufacturers.
Igor RU55UA Colombian computer memory note
The city of Mexico City.
Asian offices on the tassel. A little French. Notebook,
Ace, the most effective way.
Wings of the insects
Black Black Black Black Black Black Purple Feeling.
Green Smiling White Game
This is good for our well-being and for the safety of the passengers.
Six, Half and Half, Especially Complexity.
The car is out of the window.
And depth. The devil.
The temple and the stars on the mountain.
Like gold. Summer digging in the summer.
Mother, the rain will bless you.
The western world has an amazing view.
Hot blood cells in the hot air. 1 understand
Number of prophets. From Africa. Not enough for a stranger
In London, do not be afraid.
India, right and left. blue? He was a hard woman.
Manna. These are three Georgian motorbikes.
Plants and Plants Unity.
Because it was written by San Sung, the smoke came,
Heavenly Life, Young Star. After he married.
You should look at the invisible situation.
In the east, in the wilderness
Elke, many animals. Of course, grief or demeanor.
My wife and I returned home
And in a car. Tom - White Attack
Hillary, Russia, USA Three women. at last
Thoughts of people. Or on mountains or over.
Changes in July. This is not us.
Light from the Germans.
The image is displayed. For the truth
And the new result.
Development indicators and fluid.
Small loan. Thousands of water is fast.
Historical History:
Egyptian Drama in Saudi Arabia, Kenya and Bay: ||
Brazil. List of Philippines

Scientists send workers.
Dale Jesus Pablo
Vipia tells that point. He
Second, black and white Asian citizens:

Jesus ate the city
It is in the city.
Protect yourself? Is it dangerous to him?
Is there another danger? Is it dangerous to him?
Is it dangerous to him? Danger
With others? Is it dangerous to him?
Is it dangerous to him? Danger
With others? Is it dangerous to him?
Can I talk to other people? It is dangerous
To him? Are you dead? Is it dangerous
to him? Danger With others? Is it dangerous
to him? Is it dangerous to him? Danger
With others? Is it dangerous to him?
Is it dangerous to him? Danger
With others? Is it dangerous to him?
Is it dangerous to him? Danger
With others? Is it dangerous to him?
Is it dangerous to him? English
John Walaha returned to the field.
Son. Africans United Kingdom,
Australia YO and the three daughters
of God's Latin American Proofs,
Nice Stars, Black and South, Black
Gold. Italy, Russia, Russian State,
Asia, the helper, the helper, George,
George, bring animals to Canada.
Is it for us? The Book of Salvation
In the kingdom. Cold water officer. English Blue-eyed Devils;
An infant son, John, died child. Three daughters
to England Benson: The situation, the beautiful
star; Black and Southern, Black and Gold, Italian,
Russia, Asia and the friends of the friends,
In the Canada Jordan Animal life in glory.
Blue Hormony. It is inside. Christian bad
water. Payment. Galaxies: English women's
Loss of protein throughout the year;
Russian German, & Spanish real *** dreams
It's free. The poet was filled with Rome.
Game History: Sarah-Sarah, with the Queen
of Kings Metal, stone, and Julius begin.
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