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"atchafalaya" poems
People love poems and articles about all of the bad things, substance abuse, broken hearts, broken necks, poverty, war, depression, hunger, ****** lethargy, whatever it is, and people love those writings because they feel less alone. others have passed through these fires and a few have indeed come out alive, it’s perfectly normal—maybe, from what I tell in those poems for you to daydream about driving your car into the Atchafalaya Basin with your ex in it, or knowing that you could not just end it all even if you wanted to, because it would give you no trepidation or pleasure, just another thing of life’s routine, or maybe the only reason you have not jumped off a building is because the buildings in your town are not tall enough. Whatever the case may be, it is painfully obvious, we are all miserable on this little planet. I’m not sure if knowing so makes anything better, Or if it changes anything at all, but it is an oddly nice thought.
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Jan 26, 2012
Jan 26, 2012 at 11:40 PM UTC
Nice Thought
Atchafalaya - Such mystery seemed to reside in this cluster of letters: The music of it's sounds, the mystery of it's meaning and origin, the vastness of the swamp underneath the bridge. In my youth, the bridge seemed like a sidewalk to wondrous new vista - A frontier with a new wilderness - At once strange and familiar, unknown but innate - At first, it's lull stultified the buoyant mood that began the journey - Where the piney woods turned into the swampy alluvium of Louisiana, A state with instant personality, apparent in the ravaged roads That sang against the car tires a desperate song of it's savage frailties That could impassion or disappoint, or a combination of both, Where the Highway Patrol were unseen despots Lurking in the murky weeds and trees But (luckily) only as scenery in my stories. Where the lure of New Orleans began to emerge, My imagination running wild with drunken tales of spicy food And sensuous women, looking for unspoken desires In de Beinville's Vieux Carré, where Old God's run wild - This place where magic was in the freedom found there - Tip-toeing, drunk, across the sharpened swords - Through the chicken-bloodied doors - Ah, but the swamp was a source of strange dreams and visions Throughout my life, And it will always make my heart race When I approach the Atchafalaya Basin Bridge.
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Mar 30, 2015
Mar 30, 2015 at 4:37 PM UTC
Atchafalaya Basin Bridge
Two cypress trees stand bare together in the Atchafalaya Midway between Aurora And tomorrow Or maybe just more casualties To the brackish tide?
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Jul 25, 2015
Jul 25, 2015 at 3:54 AM UTC
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