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Dear Insecurities, I know this seems like a message that's supposed to be uplifting but its not If I could change anything about you there's a lot I would fix. Id make my hair luscious, straight, blonde Id get rid of the waves, the frizz, the thickness, the oil, the brown, shades of blue faded from October, Id blend in with the rest and people wouldn't pick up my hair and think ugly theyd think beautiful theyd stop in awe just to give a complement and maybe not an insult. Id make my body as thin as a pencil, my waist size would be so tiny its unlisted, my thighs wouldnt spread when I sat, could count every rib, and never afraid to step on a scale, people wouldnt have to throw around the word fat at me instead they'd be scared, scared if they said that word again I would starve myself so much I would be gone Id make my face beautiful put together eyebrows, thin lips, tiny nose, clear skin, almost so clear you could feel and there would be nothing but smooth nobody wouldnt go around and call me pepperoni pizza would stare and wonder what products I put on my face and I would whisper nothing Id make my scent always smell good id smell of lavender and rose you'd walk in the room and instantly stare at me wondering where did she get that scent you wouldn't go up to me and tell that my depression has made it so hard I can barley take a shower anymore and wouldn't suggest perfume maybe you'd suggest putting less on Id make my finger nails perfectly long not uneven like thumb long index finger short pointer finger long pinkie short my hands wouldnt be as small as the rest my nails wouldnt have dirt in them they'd be clean so clean it looked perfectly white unneaded of nail polish Id make my eyes a beautiful shade of blue not an ugly dark brown people would stare and get lost in them and think wow magnificent not so ugly there hard to look into would be the thing that sticks out about you and think that's her best feture that's what I wanted Id make my arms and legs unscared they would shine beautifully in the light nobody would stare and think she must be depressed they'd stare and think wow shes beautiful I wish someone would stare and think wow shes beautiful the only person who told me that was emi and that must've been lies everyones called me ugly ugly ugly and that's what I was dear insecurities, can you fix me please? I'm sick of living in a body I don't want to be mine I want to be like everyone else maybe even prettier if you can please? fix me?
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Jan 5
Jan 5, 2026 at 2:14 PM UTC
Dear Insecurities
Dear Insecurities, I know this seems like a message that's supposed to be uplifting but its not If I could change anything about you there's a lot I would fix. Id make my hair luscious, straight, blonde Id get rid of the waves, the frizz, the thickness, the oil, the brown, shades of blue faded from October, Id blend in with the rest and people wouldn't pick up my hair and think ugly theyd think beautiful theyd stop in awe just to give a complement and maybe not an insult. Id make my body as thin as a pencil, my waist size would be so tiny its unlisted, my thighs wouldnt spread when I sat, could count every rib, and never afraid to step on a scale, people wouldnt have to throw around the word fat at me instead they'd be scared, scared if they said that word again I would starve myself so much I would be gone Id make my face beautiful put together eyebrows, thin lips, tiny nose, clear skin, almost so clear you could feel and there would be nothing but smooth nobody wouldnt go around and call me pepperoni pizza would stare and wonder what products I put on my face and I would whisper nothing Id make my scent always smell good id smell of lavender and rose you'd walk in the room and instantly stare at me wondering where did she get that scent you wouldn't go up to me and tell that my depression has made it so hard I can barley take a shower anymore and wouldn't suggest perfume maybe you'd suggest putting less on Id make my finger nails perfectly long not uneven like thumb long index finger short pointer finger long pinkie short my hands wouldnt be as small as the rest my nails wouldnt have dirt in them they'd be clean so clean it looked perfectly white unneaded of nail polish Id make my eyes a beautiful shade of blue not an ugly dark brown people would stare and get lost in them and think wow magnificent not so ugly there hard to look into would be the thing that sticks out about you and think that's her best feture that's what I wanted Id make my arms and legs unscared they would shine beautifully in the light nobody would stare and think she must be depressed they'd stare and think wow shes beautiful I wish someone would stare and think wow shes beautiful the only person who told me that was emi and that must've been lies everyones called me ugly ugly ugly and that's what I was dear insecurities, can you fix me please? I'm sick of living in a body I don't want to be mine I want to be like everyone else maybe even prettier if you can please? fix me?
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I seem to always fall into the cracks between your words. I can’t seem to land on them. Believe them. I’d rather fall into a mysterious black hole I’ve created to imagine my own version of what you say. I drive myself crazy. Not believing. Not seeing. Just ruining. What could be.
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Apr 28, 2018
Apr 28, 2018 at 1:47 AM UTC
Cracks
paint me the colors of the rainbow cover all my dullness, all my grayness make me a mask of colors make it happy no sight of sadness should be there make my clothes gleam and glow to shine away all my flaws as it is expected that my body will be perfect make my shoes shine bright red like those of dorothy's to hide the red blisters they are causing paint me the colors of the rainbow, make me shine bright to mask all the pain
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Apr 14, 2018
Apr 14, 2018 at 12:05 PM UTC
paint me the colors of the rainbow
I might be insecure and probably I am, but why are you staring at me like that? no that only you but you and you and you and you and you...? why is there no depth in your eyes? the simplicity of your movements opposes the movement you make with your eyes why go through all that trouble staring at me? am I mystical or something? do you see something that I didn't notice about myself? If you do please don't hesitate to ask a question I won't bite please as all I see in your eyes is no remorse I was sitting on a sidewalk while people were passing right by me all giving me weird stares maybe because of my race my mischievous smile the black clothes that I'm wearing or maybe the uncomfortable presence I bring So with my insecure ways I bring a newspaper on my race, pretending to read and made a wish when the newspaper went down I only saw a bunch of people just like me   passing by, all staring at me weirdly but when I check to see my hands it wasn't me It was somebody else well it was somebody per each second and as I began to constantly change form I got up and join the passing crowd they parted away from me , but I don't care because now everybody knows how it feels to be me to be stare at with no remorse.
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Apr 15, 2014
Apr 15, 2014 at 12:04 PM UTC
Stares
Oh how I love wearing my sweaters I wear then in the morning,especially at night in the cold and summer in the public and private places when I fell all soo happy and also when I'm depressed It's like a shell It protects from this dangerous world the world criticism stings me giving me a lethal dose of paranoia and sleep deprivation Well  luckily I have my sweaters It's my cup of Joe my video game my secret lover my special listener my doctor my savior Oh it saves me alright from the world isolating me from the world making me lonely and cold But it is worth it oh this world can be dangerous i don't want my soul to be drain But eventually when I'm ready I will break from this cocoon and spread my wings so that everybody can see my warmth and salvation My sweaters they are nice to have but it is not meant to be worn for a long time.
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 7:21 PM UTC
My Sweaters
i am nothing but a broken hearted scarred and scorned woman lacking the love and attention that i had so long searched for though it seems i may have found a sudden break in the clouds i'm terrified of what's inside for even the sun hides sometimes so when the floods come and the fire burns out and i've caused enough disappointment and there is no tomorrow and there is no good feeling and there are no smiles when the flood of my tears destroys all you built to keep us afloat ...when it all fails i may as well take a knife to my throat
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Aug 1, 2014
Aug 1, 2014 at 10:44 PM UTC
i'm going to hurt you