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 Dec 2013 soul in torment
rachel
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When she's awake at 3:30 in the morning out in the dark of night,
Standing on the balcony alone,
Don't touch her.
Her body is riddled with anxiety and could burst at any moment.
Her heart is land mine,
Waiting to explode at any minute.

So,
When she's crying in bed at 12 in the afternoon,
don't comfort her,
Because her tears are like razors,
And could slash your throat in seconds.
Her skin is infected with hatred,
And it could ****.

When she's feeling lonely,
Don't accompany her,
Because she's vicious,
And her venom is waiting to suffocate you.
She's a snake in disguise,
Waiting to attack.
might edit this some more, still a work in progress
I want you to know that your my shinning star
You fill my heart with your magnificent light
You brighten my day and night with your dazzling light
You may not know it but you are my muse
You are my inspiration in many ways
Thoughts of you keep me going on difficult days
You brighten my days and night with dazzling light
I want you to know that whether you are near and far
You are my shinning star
You fill my heart with magnificent light
I want you to know that even though our time together is to brief
I always believe in you, and hold you dear in my heart
It is hard to part from you
You may not know it, or I might not show it but after we say Goodbye
I start to cry,then i remember, that i can not hold onto you forever
because you are a shinning star and are destined for greatness
Your my shinning star you fill my heart with magnificent light
I know that you encourage me to follow my dreams
I want you to know that a very big dream already came true
The day I first held you in my arms, and looked in your eyes and saw
that light there, and I am sure my eyes were glowing too,
I remember that day in December like it was yesterday
Always remember your a shinning star
I want you to know your my shinning star
you fill my heart with your magnificent light
you brighten my day and night with your  dazzling light
This poem is one I wrote for my daughter whose Birthday was earlier this week.
I hope she reads it soon, I think she will be surprised, I hope she likes it!!
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