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Elena Dec 2024
The Sound of Love (in response to "The Silence Of Love" by Han Yong-un)
Love is here, here is my love
I know what you feel
what you felt was very real
But I can gladly say
Goodbyes are not forever
As you wished he would stay
Your people were so clever
Those cold ashes that blew away,
Turned back into a gold- mosaicked flower
Now in peace you may lay
Now you can forever stay in the bower
This is a poetic response so I highly recommend reading "The Silence Of Love" by Han Yong-un before reading this poem
Rachel Thomas Aug 2024
All fruit is sweet as marzipan
and seraphs carol just for me
Each brook sings like a silver lyre
and finches trill in every tree

Life is a cloth embossed with gold
and even through the blackest rains
No rainbow seems too hard to reach
for ichor courses through my veins

Those daedal thoughts flow thick and fast
like honey from mosaicked hive
The world's a Garden of Delights
I burst with joy to be alive

And now it starts, the skyward flight
slow at first then gath'ring pace
Just like a breathless fairground ride
that sends me whirling into space

And on my climb to crackling sun
I glimpse a gilded paradise
That sphere aswirl with cherubim
and full of riches without price

But like hot-headed Icarus
who thought that he would try his luck
I, too, fly straight towards the sun
and all my feathers come unstuck

Then rainbows smash like Roman glass
and splinters ****** all around
My head aswarm with twinkling stars
as floating castles hit the ground

That plump brocade I once called life
is torn asunder at the seams
Now all I wish to do is sleep
and quench my thirst in lethean streams.

— The End —