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Bobby Houston
Kilmarnock Scotland    Poet, photographer, walker
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Poems

chimaera Feb 2015
houston, come in, houston, i told her to stay put, houston!, but she wouldn't listen, houston!, she let it all flood in and it spread all over, houston!, she said she was digging it all but she knew nothing, come in, houston!, i tell her it will all fade away but she says she is making it all flow out, houston!, she is getting out, houston,

this is houston. we hear you, clear and sound. and we don't give a ****.
12.2.2015
Just have a crush on that line, from Appollo 13, and that sense of alarm on a life-threatening situation. Tried a 'mise-en-scène' for a inner conflict, staring a brain, a heart and a kind of supra-consciousfull voice... (Sorry for the long note and for republishing it after hesitating...)