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like a fireplace she gave me a spark, knowing I needed the light.   Starting as just a ember, I soon became Bright, It was to Her, in which I surrendered. she watched me patiently, despite the pain on which I brought her, because of the choices I made,  I should have been stronger.  she is always forgiving, and always understanding, no matter who you are, She thought my old activites, where quite bizzare. I was wreckless, selfish on how I act, She said that  "it was responsibiliy  that I had  lacked". I gave her arrogance, I gave her attitude, I made her worry, she laughed and joked on how this would be a journey. She looks for answers she could not find above, she give me hope, she gives me meaning, She is Love. By now I've began to notice, with a small diagnosis, that she begins to cave, because she is human to, she became emotions slave. I was not the reason, for I know her inside and out, I was by her side, without a doubt. Wanting to give back that spark she gave me oh so long ago, I reach out to her, trying to feed her dying flame, It was the constant barrage of feelings that where to blame. So I sit here trying to rekindle her heart, but with the current obstacles, we slowly drifted apart.
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Oct 31, 2014
Oct 31, 2014 at 11:27 AM UTC
Fireplaces (follow up to Her.)
like a fireplace she gave me a spark, knowing I needed the light.   Starting as just a ember, I soon became Bright, It was to Her, in which I surrendered. she watched me patiently, despite the pain on which I brought her, because of the choices I made,  I should have been stronger.  she is always forgiving, and always understanding, no matter who you are, She thought my old activites, where quite bizzare. I was wreckless, selfish on how I act, She said that  "it was responsibiliy  that I had  lacked". I gave her arrogance, I gave her attitude, I made her worry, she laughed and joked on how this would be a journey. She looks for answers she could not find above, she give me hope, she gives me meaning, She is Love. By now I've began to notice, with a small diagnosis, that she begins to cave, because she is human to, she became emotions slave. I was not the reason, for I know her inside and out, I was by her side, without a doubt. Wanting to give back that spark she gave me oh so long ago, I reach out to her, trying to feed her dying flame, It was the constant barrage of feelings that where to blame. So I sit here trying to rekindle her heart, but with the current obstacles, we slowly drifted apart.
christian-victoria
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Oct 31, 2014
Oct 31, 2014 at 11:27 AM UTC
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