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one door closed, another opened but even knowing that there is no way to twist and wring positive thoughts from a door slammed in my face you told me why you preferred closed doors but even so that hurt me more doubt eggshells crack and hatch branching thoughts of what this must mean were we not friends? i thought we were but i kept my thoughts unseen do i regret this? at the time i didn't want to seem desperate if i asked again i might've found another way but caring so much about this was pathetic in the end, i don't know myself muses have died and revived from the ashes repurposed feelings like a fire-heat phoenix they're part of me now, we've survived all the crashes you can have your doors, closed they may be because exterior and interior aren't important at all different paths but we still walk the same road i'm over it, it was nothing personal and i'm not gonna fall
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Sep 23, 2014
Sep 23, 2014 at 11:35 AM UTC
giving closure to sudden closure
one door closed, another opened but even knowing that there is no way to twist and wring positive thoughts from a door slammed in my face you told me why you preferred closed doors but even so that hurt me more doubt eggshells crack and hatch branching thoughts of what this must mean were we not friends? i thought we were but i kept my thoughts unseen do i regret this? at the time i didn't want to seem desperate if i asked again i might've found another way but caring so much about this was pathetic in the end, i don't know myself muses have died and revived from the ashes repurposed feelings like a fire-heat phoenix they're part of me now, we've survived all the crashes you can have your doors, closed they may be because exterior and interior aren't important at all different paths but we still walk the same road i'm over it, it was nothing personal and i'm not gonna fall
it was a while ago. i was over it in 2 days. doesn't mean i can't be inspired by emotions i experienced at that time.
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Sep 23, 2014
Sep 23, 2014 at 11:35 AM UTC
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