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You were the first without knowing, burst my balloon with simple harpoon And opened my eyes.                           To a world in disguise.                           I soon realize the lies told.                     and began to swoon for thou.              I let you graffiti my brain the pretty words like concrete permanent imprint, dominant in nature The ornamentation of my determined mind. Black and Blue,                                       my undoing                                           my favourite viewing                             to which I was glue to                                          It was a slow grow didn't know any better until the letter came your name centered in the middle Like a benign vine,                               dining with a glass of wine.                 Sent icy shivers down my spine.           entwined with flames,                           sent from cloud nine.                                             But that was then.                                 and this is now I have since moved on.                         I no longer fawn. But I can not forget thee. when you still fill me with glee So I thank you, for my change is thy's work. For being the first. and I will never forget you.
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Sep 13, 2014
Sep 13, 2014 at 4:49 AM UTC
Black & Blue
You were the first without knowing, burst my balloon with simple harpoon And opened my eyes.                           To a world in disguise.                           I soon realize the lies told.                     and began to swoon for thou.              I let you graffiti my brain the pretty words like concrete permanent imprint, dominant in nature The ornamentation of my determined mind. Black and Blue,                                       my undoing                                           my favourite viewing                             to which I was glue to                                          It was a slow grow didn't know any better until the letter came your name centered in the middle Like a benign vine,                               dining with a glass of wine.                 Sent icy shivers down my spine.           entwined with flames,                           sent from cloud nine.                                             But that was then.                                 and this is now I have since moved on.                         I no longer fawn. But I can not forget thee. when you still fill me with glee So I thank you, for my change is thy's work. For being the first. and I will never forget you.
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Sep 13, 2014
Sep 13, 2014 at 4:49 AM UTC
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