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Not often did he wish for things, He had few petty desires. “What’ll come will come,” he’d say, with a knowing nod. And he was happy that way. He’d smile. Most called him an accomplished man He left the past behind. His monsters were gone Defeated at last Not many were considered truly content these days, But this man, they said, he’d made it. He’d sit by the fire with a cup of tea. He’d read stories to his children, he’d sing them to sleep. But his heart longed for little more, just one final request Not for himself, but for the woman that lay near. The most magnificent woman he’d had the pleasure to know She lit up each room with a heavenly glow. This woman, he’d said, oh, she’s one of a kind, Not one word was questioned when he explained why. She was the kind to leave food on the sill for the cat That had never belonged to her Because she couldn’t bare the look in its eyes When the neighbour three doors down no longer could. She was the type who could never in her life tell a joke Because she was out of breath with laughter Long before the punchline arrived. She was impossible to hold a grudge to, A blessing to the world. Though insecurity engulfed her Self-esteem was unheard of Seeing herself through devils’ eyes, Heartbroken at her own reflection. If the man wanted one last thing, It would be a day in his life, for her Plain and simple. She’d see the way she curled her hair Behind one ear when she laughed. A golden noise, full of light, He wished she knew That it put everything right. His dying wish was, to the love of his life; “Please, let her see herself, through someone else’s eyes.”
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Aug 6, 2014
Aug 6, 2014 at 10:31 PM UTC
Through someone else's eyes.
Not often did he wish for things, He had few petty desires. “What’ll come will come,” he’d say, with a knowing nod. And he was happy that way. He’d smile. Most called him an accomplished man He left the past behind. His monsters were gone Defeated at last Not many were considered truly content these days, But this man, they said, he’d made it. He’d sit by the fire with a cup of tea. He’d read stories to his children, he’d sing them to sleep. But his heart longed for little more, just one final request Not for himself, but for the woman that lay near. The most magnificent woman he’d had the pleasure to know She lit up each room with a heavenly glow. This woman, he’d said, oh, she’s one of a kind, Not one word was questioned when he explained why. She was the kind to leave food on the sill for the cat That had never belonged to her Because she couldn’t bare the look in its eyes When the neighbour three doors down no longer could. She was the type who could never in her life tell a joke Because she was out of breath with laughter Long before the punchline arrived. She was impossible to hold a grudge to, A blessing to the world. Though insecurity engulfed her Self-esteem was unheard of Seeing herself through devils’ eyes, Heartbroken at her own reflection. If the man wanted one last thing, It would be a day in his life, for her Plain and simple. She’d see the way she curled her hair Behind one ear when she laughed. A golden noise, full of light, He wished she knew That it put everything right. His dying wish was, to the love of his life; “Please, let her see herself, through someone else’s eyes.”
i think we can all relate to the complete and utter frustration of seeing someone so beautiful think of themselves as the complete opposite, and not be able to show them otherwise. it frickin suuuuuuuuuuucks
hannahb
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Aug 6, 2014
Aug 6, 2014 at 10:31 PM UTC
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