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Feeling fail. A shallow discontentment only brought about by the success of others. Challenges conspire. Everywhere I look beauty and joy laughing mockingly. My poor body, weak and restless, struggling to breathe under the pressure. Water surrounds me, pounding in my ears, and it is done.
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Jun 2, 2014
Jun 2, 2014 at 5:54 PM UTC
Societal Pressure
Feeling fail. A shallow discontentment only brought about by the success of others. Challenges conspire. Everywhere I look beauty and joy laughing mockingly. My poor body, weak and restless, struggling to breathe under the pressure. Water surrounds me, pounding in my ears, and it is done.
nicole-singleton
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Jun 2, 2014
Jun 2, 2014 at 5:54 PM UTC
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