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I stole away, with an
 Angel intent on keeping 
 Me company, for my
 Last day on earth She drew my name in the clouds with 
Ink she bought from God,
 Broke my bed,
 Ripped my blankets, and 
Sat me down to
 Mock my ignorance Needing a place to sit,
 We built a bench, out of
 Broken promises 
Each knot in the wood 
Melted into a bitter syrup, as I
 Recommitted it to memory We drank coffee behind the 
Store that sold my 
Innocence to those more
 Deserving of the 
 Luck they’d received.
 Their tender was 
 Myth and merchandise,
 Final sale,
 No return. The torn soles, on the shoes I
 Wore, slid softly through the 
Field of grinning flowers, their
 Beauty rivaled only by their
 Obvious ignorance Fingers wrapped my wrist,
 Departure was inevitable 
Wings spread, we soared over the 
Blue and purple of the  
Flowers, shaded darkly by the 
 Sun’s embarrassment But from miles up, my
 Sight, seemingly unchanged by my
 Decreasing proximity
 Showed me their vigilant smiles Had she dropped me 
 Anywhere else, the
 Beautiful field of 
 Terminal foliage 
Would sway the same, with
 Each windy eve I woke up, drunk on
 Sleep and whiskey, as the
 Sobering veracity of my
 Failure to keep dreaming 
Became achingly apparent.
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Apr 24, 2014
Apr 24, 2014 at 12:09 PM UTC
Angel ; Last Night on the Planet
I stole away, with an
 Angel intent on keeping 
 Me company, for my
 Last day on earth She drew my name in the clouds with 
Ink she bought from God,
 Broke my bed,
 Ripped my blankets, and 
Sat me down to
 Mock my ignorance Needing a place to sit,
 We built a bench, out of
 Broken promises 
Each knot in the wood 
Melted into a bitter syrup, as I
 Recommitted it to memory We drank coffee behind the 
Store that sold my 
Innocence to those more
 Deserving of the 
 Luck they’d received.
 Their tender was 
 Myth and merchandise,
 Final sale,
 No return. The torn soles, on the shoes I
 Wore, slid softly through the 
Field of grinning flowers, their
 Beauty rivaled only by their
 Obvious ignorance Fingers wrapped my wrist,
 Departure was inevitable 
Wings spread, we soared over the 
Blue and purple of the  
Flowers, shaded darkly by the 
 Sun’s embarrassment But from miles up, my
 Sight, seemingly unchanged by my
 Decreasing proximity
 Showed me their vigilant smiles Had she dropped me 
 Anywhere else, the
 Beautiful field of 
 Terminal foliage 
Would sway the same, with
 Each windy eve I woke up, drunk on
 Sleep and whiskey, as the
 Sobering veracity of my
 Failure to keep dreaming 
Became achingly apparent.
I grew up, under the impression that I'd probably end my life at age 18. I wrote this poem on Day 6,575. (I'm 20 now. :) 18 + one day more.
seanflagstaff
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Apr 24, 2014
Apr 24, 2014 at 12:09 PM UTC
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