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It feels like holding your breath until your lungs ache and your ribs creak because your heart is beating so fast complaining for lack of oxygen but you won't you won't breathe who cares if it hurts? who cares if your throat burns and your eyes water? for even water is part oxygen and perhaps the pain would stop if you inhale and find two parts hydrogen as well.
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Mar 25, 2014
Mar 25, 2014 at 12:07 PM UTC
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It feels like holding your breath until your lungs ache and your ribs creak because your heart is beating so fast complaining for lack of oxygen but you won't you won't breathe who cares if it hurts? who cares if your throat burns and your eyes water? for even water is part oxygen and perhaps the pain would stop if you inhale and find two parts hydrogen as well.
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Mar 25, 2014
Mar 25, 2014 at 12:07 PM UTC
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