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Standing here in that dark room looking away. I let you take advantage of me. But now I even feel so much more empty. It was something I just felt I had to do, a bucket list thing. Don’t know what I was thinking, just a feeling. But I learned that there’s a thin line between giving something and giving even more. It’s confusing, I don’t even know exactly what you took. I just feel so empty. So now I’m standing in a dark room in my head looking back. I thought it should be fine as long as I would keep thrack of what was yours and what was mine. Now I know that there’s a thin line.... You aimed for the most or you just didn’t aim right. So it landed somewhere where it hurts. On me and now I even feel so much more empty. It was something I just felt I had to do, a bucket list thing. Don’t know what I was thinking, just a feeling. It started off right, trusting letting go. Killing off the gatekeeper. I should just have let him take a break. Not take him to the grim reaper. But now I know that there’s a thin line between giving something and giving even more. It’s confusing, I don’t even know exactly what you took. I just feel so empty.
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Oct 29, 2020
Oct 29, 2020 at 5:49 AM UTC
Dark room.
Standing here in that dark room looking away. I let you take advantage of me. But now I even feel so much more empty. It was something I just felt I had to do, a bucket list thing. Don’t know what I was thinking, just a feeling. But I learned that there’s a thin line between giving something and giving even more. It’s confusing, I don’t even know exactly what you took. I just feel so empty. So now I’m standing in a dark room in my head looking back. I thought it should be fine as long as I would keep thrack of what was yours and what was mine. Now I know that there’s a thin line.... You aimed for the most or you just didn’t aim right. So it landed somewhere where it hurts. On me and now I even feel so much more empty. It was something I just felt I had to do, a bucket list thing. Don’t know what I was thinking, just a feeling. It started off right, trusting letting go. Killing off the gatekeeper. I should just have let him take a break. Not take him to the grim reaper. But now I know that there’s a thin line between giving something and giving even more. It’s confusing, I don’t even know exactly what you took. I just feel so empty.
SharpenMiedema
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34/F/Gouda(NL)
Oct 29, 2020
Oct 29, 2020 at 5:49 AM UTC
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