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Worry a'creapin Confusion sets Nerves are startled Fear Upsets Minds a racin' Thoughts implode Face is flushed Fear Explodes Hearts a'flutter Chest tightens up Voices stutter Fear Erupts Hearts a'poundin Sweat then rolls Panic resounding Fear unfolds Deaths a'loomin Dreads attack All consuming Fear is back Peace a'buildin Calm ensues If Gods willing Fear defused
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Oct 21, 2020
Oct 21, 2020 at 5:35 PM UTC
Anxiety
Worry a'creapin Confusion sets Nerves are startled Fear Upsets Minds a racin' Thoughts implode Face is flushed Fear Explodes Hearts a'flutter Chest tightens up Voices stutter Fear Erupts Hearts a'poundin Sweat then rolls Panic resounding Fear unfolds Deaths a'loomin Dreads attack All consuming Fear is back Peace a'buildin Calm ensues If Gods willing Fear defused
I learned a 2 beat structure similar to this from a friend on Facebook. I took what I learned and put my own twist on it by bouncing back and forth between 2 and 3. Even kind of a 3-4. I think it sounds better with that beat rather than a constant 2. As if I did anything to explain what I mean by a beat-structure lol. Its just my personal language that I use. I used that structure while thinking about anxiety and this is the result.
SirxKenneth88
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33/M/Indiana, USA
Oct 21, 2020
Oct 21, 2020 at 5:35 PM UTC
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