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If redemption is measured by one's purity, then no foot would step on the streets of gold. Those grand mansions promised to the "true children of god" will be nothing more than just bricks and stones. Those gates would remain shut. White garments would remain unworn. The paradise would be left alone in its own for eternity cause no one will ever be worthy. God said it himself. So i don't see no point bruising your knees down on prayers, living most of your life by a scripture written by men. Living by the promise of an eternity without fear, pain and tears. Without these things that maketh life people will go crazy in heaven
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Apr 18, 2020
Apr 18, 2020 at 11:07 AM UTC
Heaven will make people crazy
If redemption is measured by one's purity, then no foot would step on the streets of gold. Those grand mansions promised to the "true children of god" will be nothing more than just bricks and stones. Those gates would remain shut. White garments would remain unworn. The paradise would be left alone in its own for eternity cause no one will ever be worthy. God said it himself. So i don't see no point bruising your knees down on prayers, living most of your life by a scripture written by men. Living by the promise of an eternity without fear, pain and tears. Without these things that maketh life people will go crazy in heaven
Just a thought. I'm just tired of churches claiming they're the one true crap. corrupting and stealing from its flock.
illustra
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Apr 18, 2020
Apr 18, 2020 at 11:07 AM UTC
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