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I know you still share feelings                    (a) Though, with different meanings              (a) for I remember:                                             (c) Your heart gazed into my ego                      (d) Your crystalline eyes                                    (e) with pristine seas                                          (f) Melted my heart, like that of ice                 (g) Your lips, rewrote my affection                  (h) Things might be different                           (i) Though I might now be an insurgent       (i) for if I re-render:                                          (c) Your lips, told me to go                              (d) on the most obscure days                           (e) in a world of dying trees                            (f) with no breath, like lab mice                     (g) I tied a noose, with my rejection               (h)
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Apr 12, 2019
Apr 12, 2019 at 4:27 AM UTC
Inexhaustible, perpetual Feelings
I know you still share feelings                    (a) Though, with different meanings              (a) for I remember:                                             (c) Your heart gazed into my ego                      (d) Your crystalline eyes                                    (e) with pristine seas                                          (f) Melted my heart, like that of ice                 (g) Your lips, rewrote my affection                  (h) Things might be different                           (i) Though I might now be an insurgent       (i) for if I re-render:                                          (c) Your lips, told me to go                              (d) on the most obscure days                           (e) in a world of dying trees                            (f) with no breath, like lab mice                     (g) I tied a noose, with my rejection               (h)
A poem to my beloved, to whom I say thank you for making me push to the point where I wanted to take my own life. I still love you and I know you love me too, but it's the worst kind of love you can find
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23/M/South Aftica
Apr 12, 2019
Apr 12, 2019 at 4:27 AM UTC
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