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how death can be so beautiful to one bringing peace and joy freedom from this world of hell this illusion death gave to ease one's suffering he desired it so much that he killed himself blossoms bloom as the Rose's petal make mess the greediness of the boy may have given him a new world to dance but everything comes with a price a sin was committed upon his death a whole new world of pain and emotional suffering brought to those who surrounded the withering, red Rose for they wanted it to grow with them instead they weeped for the deceased and crowded around their friend his family losing mentality as they stare at the gun the corpse was holding chaos brewed cataclysm loomed "what happened to our beautiful creation did i not try hard enough the kids are crying im crying" "why." mother stares at son then his petals his beautiful petals im sorry knife at the table wanting to justify her unjust actions towards him and make it all even again so then maybe he can forgive her and another beautiful flower loses its petals to the grand illusion of death.
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Nov 21, 2018
Nov 21, 2018 at 1:14 AM UTC
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how death can be so beautiful to one bringing peace and joy freedom from this world of hell this illusion death gave to ease one's suffering he desired it so much that he killed himself blossoms bloom as the Rose's petal make mess the greediness of the boy may have given him a new world to dance but everything comes with a price a sin was committed upon his death a whole new world of pain and emotional suffering brought to those who surrounded the withering, red Rose for they wanted it to grow with them instead they weeped for the deceased and crowded around their friend his family losing mentality as they stare at the gun the corpse was holding chaos brewed cataclysm loomed "what happened to our beautiful creation did i not try hard enough the kids are crying im crying" "why." mother stares at son then his petals his beautiful petals im sorry knife at the table wanting to justify her unjust actions towards him and make it all even again so then maybe he can forgive her and another beautiful flower loses its petals to the grand illusion of death.
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17/M/Los Angeles, California
Nov 21, 2018
Nov 21, 2018 at 1:14 AM UTC
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